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The Seventh Seascape

O souls of the Island, I have silently heard through tropical torrents and surpassed a million miles of the milky seas, away from mint-marine silhouettes of my utopian wonderland, as strawberry ripples and coconut-scented musings called upon my flamboyant spirit, to explore those ebony-emeralds of universe and envelop my hope in creamy pink shells. I have soaked in sepia impressions, ebbing as crepe currents on splitting shores and windsurfed through the hibiscus rays of life by forbidding heartache hymns of yesteryears, from lurking in jewelled hours of today and built a kryptonite kayak to sail in the turquoise times of tomorrow. For, now I know that the opalescent ocean has chosen me, to return the riveting spirit of sage-rufescent rivulets back to the 'Heart of Humanity's Cosmos', shaped in soft serenades of seraphim. When the whispers of a mauve french-rose, blooming within, will uncurl their farthest wish in silken twinkles, my eyes will always remember these watercolor heights splashing crayon dusks and revealing silver moon truths, for there's more beyond the neon networks of syzygy pearl skies and chestnut reefs, yearning to be cherished by the blonde alchemy of love. So, I abandon those sooty regrets that snorkel with their fragile fins in kohl-lily gulfs and observe these constellations of intuitions, formed by the star-kissed manta rays and sketch sagacious saudades laced with hope, as a halo around the lilac Pole Star. In this mortal seascape of the seventh heaven, every orphan of darkness shimmers as the beacon of lustrous sugar-scintilla that shapes this world, in ivory-smitten spheres of magically diaphanous helix, waltzing in whispers of wind and water. Every lava-skinned, feminine flame of doleful daffodils was once a glittered cherry-red gardenia, laced with cardinal buds, who nurtured velvet seeds in the womb of celeste compassion and edenic empathy. And like myself, every sea-maiden of sequined lush ruminations, crowned with purple plumerias, is a whimsical wayfinder, wishing for ~ white bells of serenity and blue-star petals of peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/25/2024 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 1/24/2024 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Date: 9/18/2023 6:20:00 AM
Back with congratulations on a well deserved win for your amazing poem Hiya.
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Date: 9/18/2023 5:31:00 AM
Dear Hiya, Back with Hearty congratulations on your amply deserved Podium win with this wonderous poem about the ocean
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Date: 9/18/2023 4:16:00 AM
Dear Hiya, where do i start praising this? Seriously i felt like you really knew what i would like, to feel like im snorkeling and surfing through seas, as i read , and that is exactly what i felt when i read this. The depth and the way this flows, especially your word pairings, alliterations and also the imagery. Your opening is so strong! Brilliant, drew me right in! This would be poetically pleasing for any islander! How one hopes for peace! i love that! Thank u for writing. Congratulations
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/18/2023 8:04:00 AM
Thank you so much dearest Empress, this contest was such a joy to participate in, as you know that I too love oceanic imageries and mermaid tales, so it instantly elevated me to a dreamland of aqua seascapes! Thank you SO much for honouring my piece with the beautiful first place win amongst such talented poets, this means the world to me :))
Date: 9/16/2023 4:52:00 AM
My friend, this is absolutely a beautiful new creation. Your verses touch the artist's seeking heart. You paint in verse to creation fantastic new scenes. Painting as a master would do! A fav for me. God bless you..
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Date: 9/16/2023 1:06:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. You use color to your advantage very well. Deep thoughts mingle in great imagery.
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Date: 9/15/2023 10:14:00 AM
"In this mortal seascape of the seventh heaven, every orphan of darkness shimmers as the beacon of lustrous sugar-scintilla that shapes this world in ivory-smitten spheres of magically diaphanous helix," -- beautiful poetry. So many great word combinations making for original imagery, such a joy to have read. Blessings.
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Date: 9/18/2023 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind visit, Joe. I'm very glad to know that you enjoyed reading this poem and I'm beyond grateful for your immensely beautiful feedback, truly brings me so much joy! :)
Date: 9/15/2023 9:06:00 AM
What a way you have with words Hiya. A wonderful poem . Dripping with wonderful images and emotion. Just beautiful
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Date: 9/18/2023 10:00:00 AM
Dear SV, you're such a kind and sweet soul! I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this poem of mine.. Your words of appreciation always bring me so much joy :)
Date: 9/14/2023 10:58:00 PM
"built a kryptonite kayak to sail in the turquoise times of tomorrow." This is poetry of the highest rank. I cannot tell how much I enjoyed this wonderful journey to the seascape.Nothing short of a masterpiece, dear Hiya !
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/18/2023 9:59:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, to recieve these words of high appreciation from such a brilliant poetess like you, is such an honour in itself. I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed reading this write and am very grateful for your beautiful compliments, sending love :)
Date: 9/14/2023 5:39:00 PM
Very nice poem! Emerald is a cool gem! Best regards & wishes, AA
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Date: 9/18/2023 9:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comment, truly appreciate you reading my poem and grateful for the visit!!
Date: 9/14/2023 5:21:00 PM
Your poetic voice is a melody to my ears, Hiya. I love the words you caress to bring us such vibrant imagery. There are so many beautiful phrases, it's hard to choose a favorite, but " built a kryptonite kayak to sail in the turquoise times of tomorrow", really resonates with me. Thanks for making our days better by sharing your eloquent poetry with us, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:47:00 AM
Oh, thank you SO much for these beautiful words of kind appreciation, Bill. I feel so honoured to receive such wonderful compliments about this poem, from such a brilliant poet like you. Always grateful for your generous feedbacks :)
Date: 9/14/2023 2:49:00 PM
I'm all for blue star petals of peace, sweet Hiya. You took us on a colorful journey and we were your sea-faring companions, red, yellow and aqua
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:41:00 AM
Awwn, Tom, you're so kind and generous always, thank you so much for blessing my poem with such beautiful feedback. Yes, we all want blue Star petals of peace and nothing more :) your comment is so colorful!!
Date: 9/14/2023 11:53:00 AM
Thanks for all your thoughtful comments. Let me read this poem now. So. Wow, you are quite the sea maiden. You exude luscious imagery
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:38:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and leaving such kind words that have truly uplifted my heart! You are one gorgeous poetess, sending love :)
Date: 9/14/2023 11:50:00 AM
Thanks for all your thoughtful comments. Let me read this poem now.
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:37:00 AM
Awwn, it's always a pleasure to read your beautiful poems dear Andrea, I truly appreciate your visit!
Date: 9/14/2023 10:47:00 AM
Mint marine, strawberry ripples - so much more special imagery!
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:13:00 AM
Awwn, thank you SO much dear Kim, I'm very happy that you enjoyed reading this, sending love :)
Date: 9/14/2023 9:59:00 AM
- Sounds beautiful ... must admit this is a far too "high level" compared to my poetry ... really skilled and impressive, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:12:00 AM
Oh dear Anne-Lise, you're just so sweet and kind! I'm indeed, grateful for your lovely words.. Thank you so much for your kind visit and for reading! Sending love :)
Date: 9/14/2023 9:49:00 AM
I have soaked in sepia impressions ebbing as crepe currents on splitting shores and windsurfed through the hibiscus rays of life by forbidding heartache hymns of yesteryears from lurking in jeweled hours of today and built a kryptonite kayak to sail in the turquoise times of tomorrow---Your pen crafts such beautiful motifs of words, Hiya. Mesmerizing seascapes throughout hypnotize the reader. Awesome poetry!
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:11:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much for your beautifully honouring words.. I feel so blessed to know that you enjoyed reading this piece and your comments are always so uplifting. Thank you so much for reading, I truly appreciate it, regards :)
Date: 9/14/2023 9:10:00 AM
Your poem, dear Hiya, is a splendid masterpiece. It is adorned with vibrant metaphors that paint a vivid picture in the reader's mind. Your poetic essence is so profound that it transcends all imagination. Your diction combined with the impeccable imagery elevates this writing to a whole new level of beauty. Several lines struck me" soaked in sepia impressions ebbing" or "built a kryptonite kayak" symbolizing strength, to sail through the enchanting turquoise times that lie ahead. Great work
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:10:00 AM
Dear Sotto, thank you so much for your beautiful and honouring words, it's always s pleasure to receive and read your in-depth analysis of my poems. You always grasp the true essence of the writes in a very wonderful way. And you're so kind to bless me with your generous appreciation, means a lot especially coming from a brilliant poet like you! :)

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