The Secret

The Secret


“Don’t tell don’t tell.” she begged of me, with pleading in her eyes
And though I knew I really should. I listened to her cries.
We were only twelve-years-old; our lives were much the same
And I swore to keep her secret, like some exciting game.
In the weeks that followed, this knowledge gave me fear
Still, her trust in me was total and I held that very dear
My mother sensed my worry and asked if all was well
But the secret that I carried was never mine to tell
So mum took me in her arms, she didn’t shout or scold
She said that I was burdened and the secret must be told
Then, feeling like a traitor...





Gareth James' contest--leave me hanging.
 19th April 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 2:53 PM
A definite winner, Maggie...at the age of 12, keeping a secret for a friend is really a burden...Thank God for Moms who pay attention to their children...Goes to my favs....Love, your friend, Audrey
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April 19, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Nice use of rhyme to shre your story. Way to leave the reader haning. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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April 19, 2010 at 8:18 AM
GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST...P.D.
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April 19, 2010 at 6:38 AM
Wow, Margaret, this compelling poem does leave the reader hanging. What could trouble the heart of a 12 year old in this way? Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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April 19, 2010 at 5:12 AM
good write...and good luck in contest
Kelly Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 3:03 AM
I think we have all been there , at some stage , Margaret . Well rhymed story and best of luck in the contest ....
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