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The Secret

The Secret “Don’t tell don’t tell.” she begged of me, with pleading in her eyes And though I knew I really should. I listened to her cries. We were only twelve-years-old; our lives were much the same And I swore to keep her secret, like some exciting game. In the weeks that followed, this knowledge gave me fear Still, her trust in me was total and I held that very dear My mother sensed my worry and asked if all was well But the secret that I carried was never mine to tell So mum took me in her arms, she didn’t shout or scold She said that I was burdened and the secret must be told Then, feeling like a traitor... Gareth James' contest--leave me hanging. 19th April 2010

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Date: 4/19/2010 2:53:00 PM
A definite winner, Maggie...at the age of 12, keeping a secret for a friend is really a burden...Thank God for Moms who pay attention to their children...Goes to my favs....Love, your friend, Audrey
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Date: 4/19/2010 12:28:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme to shre your story. Way to leave the reader haning. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 4/19/2010 8:18:00 AM
GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST...P.D.
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Date: 4/19/2010 6:38:00 AM
Wow, Margaret, this compelling poem does leave the reader hanging. What could trouble the heart of a 12 year old in this way? Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/19/2010 5:12:00 AM
good write...and good luck in contest
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Date: 4/19/2010 3:03:00 AM
I think we have all been there , at some stage , Margaret . Well rhymed story and best of luck in the contest ....
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