The Secluded Spot

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A golden sun rises against a wispy gray cloud sky Like whipped cotton candy waiting To ease a child's sigh A jet has passed leaving a streak People on earth come and go Above the long forgotten rails Speed the essence now flows In the book of Daniel it tells Of a time when people Will travel about here and there Knowledge will increase, love rare Have we reached that time today Some plan to travel to Mars They've paid millions in advance Lovin' it more than cigars In my secluded spot alone My time to think Its privacy is now gone What will my ink think?

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/8/2018 5:03:00 PM

Probing into the soul , trying to give answers to questions that were put thousands of years ago in such a poetic manner dearest, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/9/2018 10:11:00 AM

Demetrious, I suppose that man will continue to ask the same questions until we know we have the right answers. God only knows that is a sure thing. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2018 8:09:00 AM

Yes, pondering in the secluded spot! So true of the earth today. When we have it all, why do we lose the essence of our souls?!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/8/2018 8:48:00 AM

Kim, Sometimes we love things and use people not love them and it is suppose to be the other way around love people and use things. Your comments are uplifting. Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/8/2018 8:06:00 AM

Well written Sara. I love the line: Like whipped cotton candy waiting! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/8/2018 8:39:00 AM

Heidi, Thanks for the uplifting review of my work. I appreciate your presence here. Sara