The Seaman Finds His Lighthouse

Out at sea, facing a dark heartfelt storm.
Heading for a lighthouse, taking him home.
 Looking at a lit place, over the Hill.
Music and laughter, the night was not still.
 In a mood for company,  He went in.
 Walked to the bar an ordered a Tonic and Gin.
Slow music playing as He sat alone.
Finished his drink and was headed for home.
 A lovely lady walked over to him.
Introduced herself, and smiled with a grin.
 A once in a lifetime moment in time.
His love had arrived, could this be a sign?
  Feelings he felt his heart couldn't keep pace.
He looked in her eyes, and heavenly face.
 "Oh what desires you created in me."
"I was a lonely seaman out at sea."
 You were the lighthouse that I searched for.
Holding you close and forever adore.


 
 
 Michael Tor
6/12/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 6:34 PM
I love this seaman's write Michael. Your words are so often filled with depth and soul. Sorry I missed this last month. :)
Baker Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Congrats on your poem making the Top 100 New Poems list, Michael! WTG my friend. Bill
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July 8, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Hi Michael, I love the metaphors in this and am so sorry I didn't see it earlier. I just recently started understanding how every one figures out the poem of the day here. DUH. God bless and keep on writing.
Tor Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 2:03 PM
Thank you Nancy. When I first started writing it took me a while to take in all that this site offers. We all go through the process. thank you so much for your kind words. Glad you stopped by...
Buehler Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 1:25 PM
So beautiful and well evoked, Michael! This jewel was immensely enjoyed. A fave for me. :)
Tor Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 11:01 PM
Thank you Evelyn. God bless you...
Maverick Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 1:58 PM
A goid write Michael, congratulations on Potd, I enjoyed its hopeful message.'
Tor Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 11:00 PM
Thank you Joe. God bless you...
Lindley Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Congrats on getting POTD with thi excellent new creation my good friend. Yes, a great fav for me. God bless.
Tor Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Robert thank you your kind words were uplifting to me today. God bless you my friend...
John Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 3:55 AM
Nice way to find a lighthouse, Michael. Thanks for interesting poem.
Tor Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 4:39 PM
Hey Andrew thank you for stopping by. I appreciate your comment...
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 1:12 PM
this is so romantic, and I see you got a POTD for it. Fantastic, my friend.
Tor Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 12:11 AM
Hi Andrea. Thank you for taking the time to read. I always appreciate a comment coming from you. God bless you.
Ricci Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Good Morning Michael. Hi. Oh my goodness how gorgeous is this entry. Very. I see congratulations are in order for POTD to which it is well deserved. The theme is lovely. The title is wonderful. This entry is very poetic and has all elements attached. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. It was an honor turning to your page and entry. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings (smile)
Tor Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 9:32 AM
Good morning Lisa thank you for very much appreciated feedback. God bless you, so glad you liked the theme...
M  Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 12:28 AM
Oh Michael what an amazing and very beautiful heart poem! I love the romance of the sea and lighthouses! Congratulations!! Debx
Tor Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 9:33 AM
Hi Deb, so glad you liked. God bless you... Glad you like Lighthouses and the romance of the sea. I think they go together...
Lawrence Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Beautiful nuances … takes me to another place and time . Tender love in the air creating memories from the salty sea . Dreams and thoughts wash over me . Lovely emotions and imagery greet me in your poem dear Michael ! Congratulations on POTD. Big hugs, Susan :)
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:53 PM
Hi Susan such a wonderful comment. Your words have a lovely sentiment expressed by your insightful words. Lovely thoughts and appreciation from me. So glad you liked. Hugs back, and God bless you...
Nicole Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Comparing her light, to that of a lighthouse and its radiant glow, is beautiful in every way. Your thoughts are romantic, dreamy and uplifting, all at the same time. Congratulations Michael, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:49 PM
Brandy it was nice to read your comments and your points you brought up. Thank you Dear for such a lovely comment. I really appreciate your kind words. Blessings your way...
Gorelick Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations on POTD! Anchors away my friend. Having been a fleet sailor for six years, I can assure you that your romantic verse hit the nail right on the head. Universally felt among my shipmates although never an outcome as wonderfully expressed as yours. Robert
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:46 PM
Hi Robert absolutely love your comment. I am sure if anyones input mattered the most it would be yours and those men that were out to Sea. Thank you for confirming the Poetry. Thank you Sir again for serving this Country as a distinguished Naval Officer...
Mehr Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 3:45 PM
I liked this one. I recognize myself in his writings. Nice Thanks from Maine coast.
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:43 PM
Thank you Patrick. You and Robert Gorelick have certainly been at Sea. Robert served in the Navy. So glad you can relate as yourself. Thank you for stopping by my friend...
Hawkins Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 3:38 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Michael. DELIGHTFUL Poetry in every way. A lovely poem, I enjoyed reading. Thank you, Take care, Shirley
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:25 PM
Hi Shirley. Thank you for your lovely comment...
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Team Poetry Soup...
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Hello Michael Tor, Congratulations on POTD. I sensed romance. This will be my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Hello Michael, I found it to be romantic. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Thank you Darlene. I really appreciate your thoughts on this one...
Romios Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Back! You really deserved this POTD,.for it was exquisite in form, beauty and human emotion Hugs,Pangie xx. Congratulations ****
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Pangie thank you for your kindness...
Lindley Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:30 PM
Beautifully romantic encounter and woven as if Fate played a part. Your verses are exceptional my friend. Congrats on your fine POTD. A very fine new creation. A fav.... God bless..
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Robert thank you my friend your words mean a lot to me. Blessings your way...
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 12:23 PM
- A wonderful and romantic poem, Michael :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... a pleasure to read :) - hugs
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:26 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise...
Slaughter Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Now why doesn't Robert Louis Stevenson ever have nice scenes like this in any of his seafaring tales? A very enjoyable read, Michael, and congrats on POTD.
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Good question Jim Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate your input, and comment my friend...
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 11:10 AM
Back with congratulations for POTD!
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Thank you again Kim...
Anaya Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your romance & POTD Michael Tor! Brought together by divine light, in the ending a new beginning forever together, wow!
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Happy endings are always the best. Thank you Anaya for your lovely comment...
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:42 AM
Back to extend my Congratulations on your Honor of POTD. Your poem is truly remarkable, and I am delighted that you have been bestowed with this esteemed recognition.
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Lasaad thank you Sir, for your generous words. I really appreciate them.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 8:39 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on your POTD win. A wonderful write/story. Glad you received this POTD. Have a great/blessed day with your win...........................
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Thank you Paula for such a nice comment and I will enjoy the day...
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