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The Sea and I

intangible homeless a nonentity prowling roaming almost invisible when I am tired all too obvious when I am angry i can be gentle i can be boisterous i constantly frustrate i ignore you when you call me i come rushing when you don’t i get tired of playing on my own in the mountains i get tired of kicking up a storm in the deserts i love to dance i love to sway with the trees i love to chase the clouds but most of all i love to play with you for you are my spirited soul mate you enjoy my rough caresses you swell to my touch and throw me salty kisses we twist and coil in passionate embrace before landing exhausted on the soft sand of unsuspecting beaches sometimes i make you boil sometimes you send me into a spin but wherever else i am in this world i can always taste your briny breath and always yearn for your buoyant company

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/2/2008 2:48:00 AM
great stuff here, I liked this one (too much in fact) :)
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Date: 11/26/2008 6:30:00 AM
I was a little timid about posting it but your comments changed that. I am starting to fall in love with writing again and I'm starting to see where I can go with this. You are an inspiration. You write with so much passion. I love the feeling this gave me. I love the ocean and it can be quite a possessing feeling. Rough, consuming. You're a kindred spirit, Nigel. I too, hope your dreams come true. Thank you for sharing. Love Robin
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Date: 11/24/2008 5:31:00 PM
She is beautiful, Isn't she. My wife played second fiddle to her for thirty years. I still miss that salt air. Wonderful write. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/24/2008 7:10:00 AM
Two of the most inspiring elements of nature. You did them more than justice I do believe. Awesome write! Of course. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/23/2008 3:15:00 PM
Incredible poem about the wind! I especially love your description of the interaction of the wind with the sea. Beautifully written, and thank you again so much for your comments on my poetry!
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Date: 11/23/2008 1:07:00 PM
I love the sea..but I think theres something more here? Love this..BG
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Date: 11/23/2008 11:30:00 AM
wow this is so beautiful, a wonderful way to define yourself. I loved his very powerful. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 11/23/2008 11:21:00 AM
Nigel outstanding poem - The way you describe yourself in the beginning is so open and honest it adds a great deal of power to your words - Beautiful poetry Nigel - God Bless, MJ
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