The Scream

A sudden, deeply inhaled breath cools the tender linings of the throat, belying the violence to come. A brief moment s t r e t c h e s into a thousand as adrenaline EXPLODES through veins and the [[tightly-corked]] breath expands within until, with a quivering, violent eruption, it escapes. Tumbling up the raw shaft through which it had been stolen with the force and fury of a hurricane, it rushes wildly back towards freedom. It grows, echoing, reaching for its release; Finally rattling and pummeling past the last, weak resistance of vocal chords it splits the air with a shrill, primal, guttural cry And then… Silence.
9.7.18 Contest: Write me an Emotion - Act Sponsor: Brenda Chiri
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Warrior Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Congrats! on this excellent piece, Jesse...one for the books...love & light...^WW^
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Back with congrats! Excellence. xomo
Mitra Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Wow. .a silent scream. .from my side. .such meticulous choice of words. .you are a wonderful poet..teaching newbies like me how to think focused and capture a great shot ??
Rowe Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 12:36 PM
I'm sure I'm at least every bit as much a newbie. Thank you for your kind words.
Hamilton Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Another great write, another great win! Congrats Jesse!
Rowe Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Thank you again. You've been a constant supporter.
Watson Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Yep! Definitely sums up my reaction to that mouse! What an excellent description, Jesse and congratulations on your win. Wendy
Rowe Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:42 PM
At first I was very confused thinking computer mouse... and then I realized what you meant. Thanks for your comment.
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 6:14 PM
wow, looks like you nailed it!!! (oh, I see Nina said same thing to you)
Rowe Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I feel doubly confident that I followed the intent of the contest now.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Yessss! Phenomenal job Jesse! I smell a winner, my best to you! xomo :))
Rowe Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen. There are always so many great entries so we'll see. I'm loving how these contests and all the other great writers on this site push me out of my comfort zone and inspire me to keep improving.
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