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THE SCENT OF WATER

THE SCENT OF WATER Forlorn, distance roots between you and I; Carve 'neath fire silhouettes buried grief; Burn then blurred by irrational mischief; Has crimson love gone pale and soon may die? Trampled with reasons leaving us tongue tie; Falling, slowly falling, is marriage leaf... Amor ebbing , ebbing, like a thief. Divorce papers rocketing quite, quick high! Heaven knows, flaws, deaden raw I want fix; Reckon blows, glow, freshen love flow essence; Leaden float the scent of water,redden snow mater. Lessons learned bestow order resins of brighter hello; Father God, bless aglow each corners in progression... (c)olive eloisa 4:52pm July 14, 2014 Sponsor Poet Destroyer A Contest Name one sad poem 5th place, to God be the glory.. :) ***Inspired with the verse theme: John 14: 7-9 and the movie "FIREPROOF"...

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Date: 9/25/2014 10:53:00 AM
Very lovely sonnet Olive! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 10/9/2014 3:59:00 AM
thanks much Dr. Upma.. :D I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 9/23/2014 8:45:00 PM
thank you for the comment on my comemnt, how nice.
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Date: 9/23/2014 4:08:00 PM
many congrats on your win Olive:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:35:00 PM
thanks much Jan.. :) Appreciate it.. :D
Date: 9/23/2014 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Olive. I love the two great movies you mentioned to Paul.
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:30:00 PM
thanks Much Brenda.. :D i love them two it is shared by someone. :D
Date: 9/23/2014 8:36:00 AM
COngratulations Olive_eloi! Once again I see you above me on the winners' list!:) // paul
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:29:00 PM
thanks much Paul.. :D
Date: 9/23/2014 6:24:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Olive
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Date: 10/30/2014 7:56:00 AM
thanks much Dr . Ram ..
Date: 9/23/2014 12:32:00 AM
congrats for your win dear Olive, god bless
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:27:00 PM
thanks much :) GBU
Date: 9/22/2014 9:28:00 PM
Olive, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:20:00 PM
thanks Lollie Linda.. :D hugs..
Date: 9/5/2014 3:32:00 AM
Really,,am inspirée,,its like You write down what Is the minds of many and place the words well it flows sweet
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:19:00 PM
thanks much Charlene... :) GBU
Date: 7/20/2014 7:46:00 AM
You make these Italian Sonnets look good. You've handled a sad topic well.
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Date: 7/20/2014 3:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Scott for the drop by I appreciate it..:)
Date: 7/15/2014 4:45:00 PM
An Italian sonnet this time! You never fear to tread where eagles dare! A theme which you write about very well. Divorce has become common and easy; unfortunately it has become an accepted norm and not enough is being done to protect marriages. So when couples manage to work things out it ought to be viewed as a blessing. // paul
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Date: 7/15/2014 5:26:00 PM
Well the two movies I watched "fireproof and Facing the giants" get me to write this and my poem bout most beautiful love when at the worst time one or both couple chose to know each other more in the worst cases or down point of their marriage..
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Date: 7/15/2014 5:23:00 PM
Thank you Paul..:) I hope I get to touch the theme really as its about renewal..:) when I started this And about to end it I want change cause I need some more lines to deliver the renewal theme..:) I hope the four lines get it..:) yes it ought to be :)
Date: 7/14/2014 11:35:00 AM
- Olive, this is beautiful, touching (slightly sad) and very talented Italian sonnet! - Bravo my friend :) - Luck in contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/14/2014 10:17:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise.. :) I have been very busy these days.. :D as i'm so excited.. :D i am sorry for not replying nor visiting much.. :( ill try to make up later.. :)
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Date: 7/14/2014 10:17:00 PM
hugs hugs hugs