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The Scent of Water

THE SCENT OF WATER Forlorn, distance roots between you and I; Carve 'neath fire silhouettes buried grief; Burn then blurred by irrational mischief; Has crimson love gone pale and soon may die? Trampled with reasons leaving us tongue tie; Falling, slowly falling, is marriage leaf... Amor ebbing , ebbing, like a thief. Divorce papers rocketing quite, quick high! Heaven knows, flaws, deaden raw I want fix; Reckon blows, glow, freshen love flow essence; Leaden float the scent of water,redden snow mater. Lessons learned bestow order resins of brighter hello; Father God, bless aglow each corners in progression... (c)olive eloisa 4:52pm July 14, 2014 Sponsor Poet Destroyer A Contest Name one sad poem 5th place, to God be the glory.. :) ***Inspired with the verse theme: John 14: 7-9 and the movie "FIREPROOF"...

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/25/2014 10:53:00 AM

Very lovely sonnet Olive! Congrats on huge win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 3:59:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Upma.. :D I appreciate it.. :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2014 8:45:00 PM

thank you for the comment on my comemnt, how nice.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2014 4:08:00 PM

many congrats on your win Olive:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 8:35:00 PM

thanks much Jan.. :) Appreciate it.. :D

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/23/2014 9:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Olive. I love the two great movies you mentioned to Paul.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 8:30:00 PM

thanks Much Brenda.. :D i love them two it is shared by someone. :D

Paul Callus

Date: 9/23/2014 8:36:00 AM

COngratulations Olive_eloi! Once again I see you above me on the winners' list!:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 8:29:00 PM

thanks much Paul.. :D

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2014 6:24:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 7:56:00 AM

thanks much Dr . Ram ..

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/23/2014 12:32:00 AM

congrats for your win dear Olive, god bless

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 8:27:00 PM

thanks much :) GBU

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2014 9:28:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 8:20:00 PM

thanks Lollie Linda.. :D hugs..

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/20/2014 7:46:00 AM

You make these Italian Sonnets look good. You've handled a sad topic well.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/20/2014 3:13:00 PM

Thank you so much Scott for the drop by I appreciate it..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/15/2014 4:45:00 PM

An Italian sonnet this time! You never fear to tread where eagles dare! A theme which you write about very well. Divorce has become common and easy; unfortunately it has become an accepted norm and not enough is being done to protect marriages. So when couples manage to work things out it ought to be viewed as a blessing. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/15/2014 5:26:00 PM

Well the two movies I watched "fireproof and Facing the giants" get me to write this and my poem bout most beautiful love when at the worst time one or both couple chose to know each other more in the worst cases or down point of their marriage..

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/15/2014 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Paul..:) I hope I get to touch the theme really as its about renewal..:) when I started this And about to end it I want change cause I need some more lines to deliver the renewal theme..:) I hope the four lines get it..:) yes it ought to be :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/14/2014 11:35:00 AM

- Olive, this is beautiful, touching (slightly sad) and very talented Italian sonnet! - Bravo my friend :) - Luck in contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 10:17:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise.. :) I have been very busy these days.. :D as i'm so excited.. :D i am sorry for not replying nor visiting much.. :( ill try to make up later.. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 10:17:00 PM

hugs hugs hugs