Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Italian Sonnet

The Scent of Water

THE SCENT OF WATER

Forlorn, distance roots between you and I;
Carve 'neath fire silhouettes buried grief;
Burn then blurred by irrational mischief;
Has crimson love gone pale and soon may die?
Trampled with reasons leaving us tongue tie;
Falling, slowly falling, is marriage leaf...
Amor   ebbing   , ebbing,    like a thief.
Divorce papers rocketing quite, quick high!
Heaven knows, flaws, deaden raw I want fix;
Reckon blows, glow, freshen love flow essence;
Leaden float the scent of water,redden snow mater.
Lessons learned bestow order resins of brighter hello;
Father God, bless aglow each corners in progression...

(c)olive eloisa
4:52pm
July 14, 2014
Sponsor	Poet Destroyer A
Contest Name	one sad poem 
5th place, to God be the glory.. :) 

***Inspired with the verse theme: John 14: 7-9 and the movie "FIREPROOF"... 

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 25, 2014 at 10:53 AM Very lovely sonnet Olive! Congrats on huge win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 9, 2014 at 3:59 AM thanks much Dr. Upma.. :D I appreciate it.. :D

Poet Destroyer A September 23, 2014 at 8:45 PM thank you for the comment on my comemnt, how nice.

Jan Allison September 23, 2014 at 4:08 PM many congrats on your win Olive:-) Hugs Jan xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 23, 2014 at 8:35 PM thanks much Jan.. :) Appreciate it.. :D

Brenda Meier-Hans September 23, 2014 at 9:46 AM Congratulations on your win Olive. I love the two great movies you mentioned to Paul. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 23, 2014 at 8:30 PM thanks Much Brenda.. :D i love them two it is shared by someone. :D

Paul Callus September 23, 2014 at 8:36 AM COngratulations Olive_eloi! Once again I see you above me on the winners' list!:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 23, 2014 at 8:29 PM thanks much Paul.. :D

Dr.Ram Mehta September 23, 2014 at 6:24 AM Congrats on the win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 30, 2014 at 7:56 AM thanks much Dr . Ram ..

Ma Yaseen September 23, 2014 at 12:32 AM congrats for your win dear Olive, god bless Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 23, 2014 at 8:27 PM thanks much :) GBU

Poet Destroyer A September 22, 2014 at 9:28 PM Olive, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 23, 2014 at 8:20 PM thanks Lollie Linda.. :D hugs..

Scott Thirtyseven July 20, 2014 at 7:46 AM You make these Italian Sonnets look good. You've handled a sad topic well. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 20, 2014 at 3:13 PM Thank you so much Scott for the drop by I appreciate it..:)

Paul Callus July 15, 2014 at 4:45 PM An Italian sonnet this time! You never fear to tread where eagles dare! A theme which you write about very well. Divorce has become common and easy; unfortunately it has become an accepted norm and not enough is being done to protect marriages. So when couples manage to work things out it ought to be viewed as a blessing. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 15, 2014 at 5:26 PM Well the two movies I watched "fireproof and Facing the giants" get me to write this and my poem bout most beautiful love when at the worst time one or both couple chose to know each other more in the worst cases or down point of their marriage.. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 15, 2014 at 5:23 PM Thank you Paul..:) I hope I get to touch the theme really as its about renewal..:) when I started this And about to end it I want change cause I need some more lines to deliver the renewal theme..:) I hope the four lines get it..:) yes it ought to be :)

Anne-Lise Andresen July 14, 2014 at 11:35 AM - Olive, this is beautiful, touching (slightly sad) and very talented Italian sonnet! - Bravo my friend :) - Luck in contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 10:17 PM Thank you Anne Lise.. :) I have been very busy these days.. :D as i'm so excited.. :D i am sorry for not replying nor visiting much.. :( ill try to make up later.. :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 10:17 PM hugs hugs hugs