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The scent of cinnamon buns and childhood, big, fluffy, soft, a tad sweet- oh delight; mother made the best so ooey-gooey and good, warm from the oven topped with icing white; I could have eaten the whole pan in one bite. Mother made exactly six buns for each, there was one for me, my two sisters and brother; she would set them down and we would reach, quickly she picked up the best one for father; and in short order there was one left for mother. So delicious, cinnamon, brown sugar and icing, but it is not just the buns but it takes me back; turns back time for me to a place in my life enticing, before life and sadness made our happiness crack; mother's prized recipe is still my favorite special snack. ___________________________ February 21, 2018 Poetry/English Quintain/The Scent of Cinnamon Buns Copyright Protected, ID 18-9962-37-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, The scent of baking bread . . . sponsor, Sara Kendrick First Place

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Date: 4/2/2018 5:18:00 PM
I see that you have happy memories of your mother, father, and siblings. I know that you all enjoyed eating these special treats. Congrats on placing in my contest. I appreciate you taking the time to write one for me. Our son came to live with us for a year in 2011 because he had to be out of work because of two surgeries. He said that cinnamon rolls was a special memory for him from his childhood. Sara
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations, BW. Cinnamon buns are one of my favorites. Well done.
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Date: 3/30/2018 8:31:00 PM
Adorable poem. Well done. Congrats on your win, BW.
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Date: 3/30/2018 7:26:00 PM
Congrats for your very well deserved win. LOVE the smell of those cinammon buns!
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Date: 3/30/2018 12:50:00 PM
Oh I still adore cinnamon swirls in fact I only had one yesterday! what wonderful memories Constance, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/30/2018 12:33:00 PM
'So delicious, cinnamon, brown sugar and icing' ... So lovely ... Congratulations on your nice win, BW ...
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Date: 3/30/2018 2:10:00 AM
Looks very much like what we call Chelsea buns here in the UK, delicious, as was your tasty poem, congratulations on your win Broken Wings... Mick
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Date: 3/29/2018 10:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/29/2018 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories!
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Date: 3/29/2018 3:58:00 PM
SO SWEET< sweetie!! And she only made the six?? We had ten in the family and we'd expect at least two each!! I remember when Mom made these. They are so delicious!! Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:03:00 PM
Very good write. I have one called Happiness :) I'm looking for your My Sister Love. As I came across this gem :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 8:58:00 AM
Debbie thanks so much. Oh yes Sister Love is a beautiful collab I did with James Inman
Date: 2/21/2018 1:38:00 PM
I believed every word to be true, and I can smell those buns, yummy - it would be hard to stop at just one. I loved this, the feel, the aroma even came thru and so did the innocence and value of one precious memory. This poem is to be savored, pun intended. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2018 3:14:00 PM
CayCay, thank you for the nice comment!

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