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Down in the depths, lethargic and lifeless. Wanders down to the dirty ground below. Panic in the prime brain of the sightless. Down in the depths, lethargic and lifeless. The knowledge of the cosmos is priceless As we browse life in a crimson prime show Down in the depths, lethargic and lifeless. Wanders down to the dirty ground below.
Written: February 18, 2023

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Date: 2/19/2023 7:29:00 AM
Imagine being, lethargic and lifeless, the panic rife in the prime brain of the sightless, as they wander down to the dirty ground below - powerful words my friend . Hope you are keeping well. I battle to find time to comment on the poems of my friends, please forgive me for the lapse of time Lasaad, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/18/2023 4:14:00 PM
Beautiful picture, and great poem full of wisdom and knowledge, blessings my friend
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Date: 2/18/2023 12:35:00 PM
- Woow .. I would panic ... great written, Las - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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