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The Sands of Twilight

The seamless sea stuck at skyline, its stillness at edge of night, waning waves ride the tide of time, break on sedate senile shore, the pearls of dream roll transient, adorn sinking sands of twilight. May 25, 2020 Syllable count : 15 per line (PS counter) September 26, 2021 For William Kekaula's contest : Your Best Sijo

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Date: 10/16/2021 4:57:00 AM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 10/14/2021 2:03:00 AM
An admirable write, Subimal, as always. Your words are choice picks like plucked roses without thorns. Ingeniously done my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 6/12/2020 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Subimal! Nice adjectives and imagery!
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Date: 6/12/2020 6:47:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Subimal. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/12/2020 4:53:00 AM
what a beautiful scene you have painted Subimal, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2020 2:28:00 PM
Wow..wonderful imagery..Great win Subimal..
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Date: 5/25/2020 8:27:00 PM
You have created a beautiful, tranquil scene, Subimal! Best of luck in the contest.xx Rhonda
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