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The Sands Of Twilight

The seamless sea stuck at skyline, its stillness at edge of night, waning waves ride the tide of time, break on serrated bulged shore, the pearls of dream roll transient, adorn sinking sands of twilight. May 25, 2020 Syllable count : 15 each line Contest : Let The Pens Flow - Sijo Sponsor : Jenish Somadas June 12, 2020 Contest : Brian's Select E Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 6/12/2020 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Subimal! Nice adjectives and imagery!
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Date: 6/12/2020 6:47:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Subimal. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/12/2020 4:53:00 AM
what a beautiful scene you have painted Subimal, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2020 2:28:00 PM
Wow..wonderful imagery..Great win Subimal..
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Date: 5/25/2020 8:27:00 PM
You have created a beautiful, tranquil scene, Subimal! Best of luck in the contest.xx Rhonda
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