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The Sandbox

I loved playing in the sandbox alone While Mom made dinner. I built sand castles and destroyed them Over and over again. While Mom made dinner one night I heard a noise in the usually calm woods Over and over again. An old, enchanting man emerged from behind offering his hand to me. Then I heard another noise in the usually calm woods And it said, “Come, follow me, child.” Another old, enchanting man emerged offering his hand to me And all Mom found that night was my shoe. A voice said, “Come, follow me, child.” I willingly let them lead me away. All Mom found that night was my shoe And I never played in the sandbox again. I loved playing in the sandbox alone. I built sand castles and destroyed them. A voice said, “Come, follow me, child.” And all Mom has left of me was the shoe she found that night. And I never played in a sandbox again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/25/2016 8:43:00 PM
Michaela Lowery, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/21/2016 8:44:00 PM
Hi Michaela, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/21/2016 7:42:00 PM
Michaela Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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