The Sadness of It All

The gristmill of war leaves its dead frozen
to lay on the blood soaked crusted floor of time
lifeless bent shapes, the ones chosen
in wars, caused by twisted mind's of mankind

only mothers wash blood from time's threshing floor
and only hate fed millstones grind children to death
left for the shifters who seperate no more
the hand of man, the sickle that sweeps away breath

the dead are aligned like rows of bundled sheaves
beneath etched names in stone fields of green
the marrow of life is vanquished, soil recieves
monuments of stone vanish, as time intercedes

for time swiftly passes, and man will be gone
so will the madness of death man tasted
when he rose from the muck, in the paradise of dawn
with a passion for killing, and the souls he wasted


5/24/18 contest The Gristmill Poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George   Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 9:12 AM
DEEP, PROFOUND AND POWERFUL! Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Gentry Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Breidenthal Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 5:31 AM
Amazing, awe-inspiring verse. (: -JWE
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 2:32 PM
- A deep ... fantastic write, Frederic - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Very powerful poem Frederic. You do write so well! :)
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May 24, 2018 at 12:45 PM
I find your poetry so profound, especially this one... You are my friend a master poet..
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