The S Words

Sensual , seductive, slender : smiling siren
She sits silently staring : seeing sapphire skies
Sun’s scarlet shadows , slowly sinking  silhouettes
Shining stars sprinkling skylines : systematically
Sunday sermon speaking : Searching souls singing
Songs , seeking : SALVATION
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Oyewole Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 4:48 PM
Congrats on your win~A.O
A   Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Hi Daniel, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome alliteration- poem. Had fun reading all entries. take care~LINDA
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 10:26 AM
another winner bro, well done xx
Breidenthal Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 8:53 PM
Very nice! Always, Laura
Peranteau Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 4:32 AM
Thankx for this second look at this write Mr. HGarvey ! Brilliant and worth sending to mine favz ! much love, james
Chachere Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 6:04 PM
some of your "s" words at the beginning are romantic! and the restare so wonderful(: i l ike them all, Harry. much love to you. -Always&Forever Lynn
Peranteau Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 6:38 PM
HGarvey,...typo-o on my comment,..mat is of,...don't eeeeeeeeeeeven ask how I did that,...*smiles*
Peranteau Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 6:35 PM
You had me at the pew HGarvey,..and wondering if that gift from Jehovah would ever look my way ! What a beautiful way to make me remember,..how I could not understand that sunday sermon! *smiles*,..this is my minds flight mat your write HGarvey,..forgive me if I've flown off! Hey,..our writes are our writes, right?....james great one !
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 1:30 PM
That is grandious! Wonderful alliteration. God bless you. Reading this poem certainly has blessed me. Love, DAS-J
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March 31, 2009 at 8:35 AM
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Gass Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 8:34 AM
Excellent Alliteration, HG! Such a delight to read and I love how you ended this with SALVATION! In the end that matters most! :) Love, Robin
Shango Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 6:02 AM
Dear brother HG, my poems are new placements from old writes, I have my long lag too. The love that flows here make want to feel and share, glad I could share with you on your own words. One day through sibalant showers of joy you will hear again that salvation is everything - man becoming like God again - creators in the image of the Eternal. Thanks, lots of love, the door for dialogue forever opens.
Gorelick Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 4:32 PM
HG..Simply Stunning..Barbeeg. Barbara jean
Winter Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Wow. One of the best, if not the best alliteration I've read! Amazing! Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 12:55 AM
Alliteration at its best, great write, very creative...Raul
Devonshire Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 9:43 PM
HG, I've never seen such superb style of alliteration! OK - 4 "s" words were all I could muster. I'll be sending you a Soup Mail regarding my poetry deletions. Love, Carolyn
Ginn Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 9:33 PM
Dang who knew you could do so much with an "S". Great fun HG
Townsend Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 9:02 PM
This is just flat out cool! It all flows so nicely together and it is all found in just this one letter. Wonderful talent is shown here. A true gift. I am anxious to read more of your writing. Smiles from Lolita
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