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The Rusting Rain Refrain

Auburn swirls of wind-laden leaves coast to the cleat-torn orifices of soggy, mud-clung grass. That massed flapping pile time capsule of summer sunsets is crushed with entering steps like the rusting rain refrain. A shorn sheep freezes from dusk until dawn, following a downward descending path, tattered and weather worn. Stepping stone pieces beneath our feet crumble like earthen clay like the rusting rain refrain. Stammering to speak for apathy's tragedy, words are heard like Braille to a layman, as tin roof dripping resounds loudly for failure to embrace its sloping surface. September's sobs streak down beauty's cheeks like the rusting rain refrain. A farewell feast of forbidden wheat bloats our bellies into swells, stirring grief. Playtime is rushed to sleep with resistance, as cinderblock thoughts toss and turn until drifting becomes corroding numbness like the rusting rain refrain.

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Date: 9/24/2019 1:17:00 PM
- Congratulations, Juliet ... like your description ... a gem of the fall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 9/25/2019 8:25:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine Smile.
Date: 9/24/2019 10:31:00 AM
Juliet congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem !
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 9/25/2019 8:24:00 PM
Thanks, Dear Heart.
Date: 9/23/2019 1:14:00 PM
I had a rusting rain refrain all last night here in Guatemala...congrats on our win Juliet.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 9/25/2019 4:19:00 PM
Thanks, Jeanne. It's that time of year.
Date: 9/23/2019 1:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 9/25/2019 4:15:00 PM
Thanks, Brenda.
Date: 9/23/2019 12:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem. It's a beauty. Blessings
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 9/25/2019 4:08:00 PM
Thanks, Regina. Bless you.
Date: 9/18/2019 12:10:00 PM
Thanks for your visit. I enjoyed dropping by this morning. Blessings Richard.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 9/22/2019 12:27:00 AM
Thanks, Richard.

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