The Rusting Rain Refrain

Auburn swirls of wind-laden leaves 
coast to the cleat-torn orifices
of soggy, mud-clung grass.
That massed flapping pile time capsule
of summer sunsets is crushed with entering steps
like the rusting rain refrain.

A shorn sheep freezes from dusk until dawn,
following a downward descending path,
tattered and weather worn. 
Stepping stone pieces beneath our feet 
beat against earthen clay
like the rusting rain refrain.

Stammering to speak for apathy's tragedy, 
words are heard like Braille to a layman,
as tin roof dripping resounds loudly 
for failure to embrace its sloping surface. 
September's sobs streak down beauty's cheeks
like the rusting rain refrain.

A farewell feast of forbidden wheat 
bloats our bellies into swells, stirring grief. 
Playtime is rushed to sleep with resistance, 
as cinderblock thoughts toss and turn
until drifting becomes corroding numbness
like the rusting rain refrain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:17 PM
- Congratulations, Juliet ... like your description ... a gem of the fall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ligon Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 8:25 PM
Thanks, Sunshine Smile.
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Juliet congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem !
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September 25, 2019 at 8:24 PM
Thanks, Dear Heart.
Mcgee Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:14 PM
I had a rusting rain refrain all last night here in Guatemala...congrats on our win Juliet.
Ligon Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Thanks, Jeanne. It's that time of year.
Chiri Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:24 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
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September 25, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Thanks, Brenda.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 12:19 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem. It's a beauty. Blessings
Ligon Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Thanks, Regina. Bless you.
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September 18, 2019 at 12:10 PM
Thanks for your visit. I enjoyed dropping by this morning. Blessings Richard.
Ligon Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 12:27 AM
Thanks, Richard.
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