The Rusted Gate

The Rusted Gate The lock to the old rusted gate is finally opened, but it’s too late. Heidi Sands

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Chris Green

Date: 11/10/2016 7:30:00 AM

It may not lead to where we expected but it just might lead to something better. It may be too late for the old, but it is always the perfect time for the new. This was fantastic Heidi. Good luck in the contest

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/10/2016 8:19:00 AM

That's true too Chris, Thank you. :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/10/2016 5:26:00 AM

That depends on what it leads to, doesn't it? A thought provoking write, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/10/2016 8:18:00 AM

Thanks. Yes, it depends on what it leads to. I wanted it to leave people with thinking about it.