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The Rusted Gate

A rusted, brown gate led to a beautiful secret garden. 11/8/16 One, One Liner Sponsored by: Rick Parise

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Date: 12/7/2016 5:18:00 PM
the hint of a bit of mystery and a careful closing of the gate lest it squeak
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/7/2016 7:08:00 PM
It is rusted. I never thought of that. Great idea.
Date: 11/10/2016 8:44:00 PM
oh my, this is kind of like how I saw it too, Janis!! Very nice! (thanks for choosing my city Madrid. It means a lot to me)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/11/2016 2:02:00 AM
Thanks, it was an na.
Date: 11/8/2016 7:27:00 PM
What a stark contrast - this is very beautiful Janis:-) good luck in the contest:-)hugs jan xx
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/11/2016 2:03:00 AM
Thanks and blessings , Janis.

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