The Runway

blonde hair
over long sleeves
of a tie dye t-shirt -
she’s wheeled onto the plane;
cell phones of course; headphones of course;
green-knitting in force; red deck
in four pairs of hands - on floor, someone
will score; and our grandsons
take off with our love, hugs and hearts -
headed home,
speeding down the runway,
as we set a course
back to our empty nest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 2:04 PM
It's beautiful to see how you love your family....the end said everything.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 3:36 PM
Thank you! Truly blessed that these two were able to spend two weeks with us!
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 10:36 AM
Hello Kim, Now the tow of you have time for dea ch other to do things together. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 12:02 PM
Hello kim, yes you have rest in your love nest. Hugs. /Darlene/
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Yes, absolutely! Loved the extra special time with our grands…now a little rest in our love nest…heehee
Romios Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:21 PM
Kim~ A warm and touching write.! With airplane travel , we really are not that far apart. And the USA is avast, colorful country . Overwhelming in size, variations in topography and eternally ethnically diverse. We hane members of all countries here as does Canada! Diverse and great. Not that long to fly coast to coast.Pangie bless you, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Not that far away by plane but affording to fly is the issue so we see each other a couple times a year, but I’ll take it!! Hugs
One Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Awww... yes the house will seem empty, I can imagine.. but a bit of peace and quite will be nice... I'm happy I live in the Uk, as its so small, must be hard in the US when someone lives in another state.. I feel you angst.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Especially for the kids, who want to be close!! I love them!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:45 AM
Malta is small so we reach our "runaways" with ease. But I can imagine the ache when our young ones fly away to far-off lands. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 11:15 AM
A little harder! Hugs!
Gentile Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:28 AM
Aww, Kim, such emotion resonates from your lines! Bittersweet and beautiful!! Happy Saturday!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, Mike! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 10:19 PM
It's the desolate feeling one gets when they all leave the nest and fly away in their skies. I can relate to this in your touching poem, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:31 AM
In this case it was a 2 week visit of 2 of our grandsons. Great visit! Hugs :)
Greenhough Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 6:38 PM
Sadly she is missed. I hope the visits are frequent. These words capture an important moment.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 6:58 PM
Observations made while waiting for two of our grandsons to fly home. Final 6 lines about us :)
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