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The Rose Inside My Heart -Mr

In the splendorous sky of my ardent heart, shimmering with the glow of the indigo art, as you gleamed like the tinsels of the moon, I tried to absorb your sapphire sheen hewn, but you drifted away slowly out of my sight from the sky I had carved for you with delight. In the vale of flowers in my cascading heart, you paved a turquoise trail for me to dart. As I walked with dream on its tortuous trace, I discerned the glimmer of my love encase the mesmeric embrace of the blooming rose, its patina on your alluring face eternally froze. From the dark edge of the anguished life’s night, storm clouds surged with thunders of bad plight, broke my sky of yearning into dispersed debris. I didn’t know how to make the buried dreams free from despair domain, before time came to depart, I gathered the fragments of my shattered heart. These turned into red rose buds, blooming one by one, when you returned to my garden under fervent sun. The aura of your beauty their luster transmitted, the fragrance of your blossoming love they emitted. The curl of petals like your smile set one flower apart, I plucked it, and placed the rose inside my heart. ________________ March 22, 2023 Contest : The Rose Inside My Heart Sponsored by : Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 4/2/2023 6:24:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting! God bless you.
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Date: 3/31/2023 5:17:00 PM
How precious that rose can be when it is settles deep inside your loving heart. You have made me proud. Congratulations on your winning poem, Blessings, from my heart to yours dear poet.
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Date: 3/22/2023 1:34:00 PM
I can feel the joy in the final verse, Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/22/2023 9:42:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 3/22/2023 1:08:00 PM
WOW!!! A painter paints with paints. You paint with words. A lovely write/story. Good Luck. Have a great/blessed day as you write away..............
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/22/2023 9:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words.
Date: 3/22/2023 11:24:00 AM
Gorgeous work!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/22/2023 9:41:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/22/2023 5:46:00 AM
I gaze in wonder at your ability to use words to create such vivid pictures - it certainly looks like a stallion next to my mule in this contest! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/22/2023 9:40:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and for the encouraging comment on my poem, I like the crisp and flowing poems of yours as well.

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