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The Rose Number 1

the rose is a beauty to behold it is loved by most women on this earth is it because the rose is like a woman? when it opens up and spreads its petals it shows the beauty within and the softness to the touch. yet just like a woman it has its thorns to protect its beauty. so is the woman who has been betrayed-she will never be the same she will protect the beauty like a spider protects its web. so this is what i see. the beauty of a woman which is locked up inside will bloom like a rose with nothing to hide. her beauty will be admired by men of all nations they'll try to get to her to feel the sensation. the sensation of knowing she is the one who could raise the setting sun. so as men we have to take care for once we get into their hair they'll be no way of turning back until she combs her hair and loosens up the slack. she will have us like a spider has its web and suck us dry until we're dead. but! what a wonderful death it will be as long as we live in harmony.

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Date: 3/11/2011 7:07:00 PM
i'm glad you enjoyed this one. and truth in the words
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Date: 3/11/2011 10:10:00 AM
Women are like roses, Louis. Even as they age, there is an inner beauty while the petals on the exterior fall. If you show her respect, you will live in harmony forever. But cross a woman, and the web will tighten like a noose. Very clever analogy, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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