Notes About The Poem

Today I took a photo of the open four-inch deep book of prose where I randomly placed my Dad's rose in February 1985.  It was wrapped in waxed paper, but I removed it to take the picture.

The Rose


The Rose


Dear Dad- I plucked a crimson rose that lay
upon your grave, as icy rain fell down
and joined my warm, wet tears that winter day.
Unto my heart, I pressed it close to drown
my mournful thoughts and feelings deep inside.
And then I numbly made my way back home
to grieve and heal with loved ones by my side.
But soon they left, and I was all alone.

That night I placed the crimson rose within
a random place inside a book of prose
and it pressed flat for quite some time therein.
One day I opened it to find I chose
the place that God directed me to lay
that rose in answer to my prayers of where
you were in death so that my heart could say
that everlasting life was yours to share.

What I had hoped I know for sure is true-  
for words upon the page where that rose slept,
"The Grave," by Robert Blair, bodes life anew-
in God’s eternal life our souls are kept.
My keepsake rested in a book of prose-
God’s intervention was my only guide.
Mid secret pages dried your crimson rose-
God’s answer to my prayer- with thanks, I cried.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Any Sad Poem
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Judged: 12/23/2015

~2nd Place~
Contest: Not Your Average Ballade
Sponsor: Catie Lindsey
Judged: 05/09/2015
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Watson Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Sandra, this is one of the most beautiful and touching poems I have read on this site. Sometimes I read a poem here and really wish I had written it myself. It has happened before now with your poems and this is another example. Thank you so much for entering it so that it came to my attention,Sandra. FAVE
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Dear Wendy, I so much appreciate your stopping by to read this special poem and for your very supportive, uplifting comment and Fave! Thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 3:48 AM
A beauriful and sentimental gift, Sandra! Congrats!
Haight Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Thank you very much, Balveen. Your visits and support are always appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Congrats on your top ten finish! Great poem.
Haight Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 2:02 PM
Thank you so much, Richard. Sandra
Nance Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Aww... this was touching.. now reading your notes this makes it even more personal and touching... hugs xx
Haight Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 2:02 PM
Thank you, Casarah. I really enjoyed your contest, and I so much appreciate my nice placement on your list. Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 10:20 PM
I am thoroughly and completely touched by this beautiful poem, Sandra. My emotions cannot help but feel your touching words as they stir my heart. Beautiful, just beautiful. I miss my Father, through you I just spent time with him. Thank you. CayCay
Haight Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Dear CayCay, thank you so much for your lovely comment, and I am so pleased that you could identify with my emotions which joined with yours about how we miss our Fathers. I appreciate your nice visit and uplifting words. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 6:28 AM
A very moving write Sandra, well penned..A7
Haight Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Thank you, Joseph, for your uplifting comment and nice rating. Sandra
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 3:32 PM
- A truly wonderful poem, Sandra - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Hugs, Sandra
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