The Rose

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the rose silk red charm scents a dream ~~its hold awakes me 2020 August 26 *1st Place* 'COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (5)any form any theme' ~~Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/12/2020 11:37:00 AM

Oh I like this "charmed" haiku, William. It has an enchantment about it! Congratulations on your first place win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/12/2020 11:56:00 AM

I greatly appreciate your amiable expressions, Sam, may you and yours stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/9/2020 7:03:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful William. It evokes a soft, sensuous feeling. Delightful! Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/9/2020 11:20:00 AM

Splendiferous expressions truly, Linda, I am humble by them my friend, Aloha! William

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/8/2020 3:05:00 PM

Wow, this is a brilliant haiku, William:-) Congratulations on your top win

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/8/2020 10:19:00 PM

A day well spent culminates in righteousness, Edward, thank you my friend, Aloha! William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/8/2020 8:59:00 AM

SUPERB. Great Haiku with a great picture. Congrats and Blessing

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/8/2020 9:49:00 AM

Many thanks, Anisha, for your thoughtfulness my friend, Aloha! William

Paul Callus

Date: 8/30/2020 12:18:00 AM

Lovely! Hope this is metaphorical, and the charming rose is your lady! Regards // paul

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/30/2020 5:39:00 AM

'Tis a sweet sentiment in its views, thank you, Paul, for your considerations, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William