The Rooster

A rooster stood there with his fluted crown,
Wondering which way he'd go out on the town;
He had an evil eye and with lust there was no lack,
As he gazed on the hens he was wont to attack.
His intent was to choose the easiest to find,
And with passionate wing he'd paddle her behind;
But the hens were wary of his stealthy advance,
For fear was there in each anxious glance.
There was no love for he was no friend,
And the attack was bitter right to the end;
There were scuffles and shuffles and bruised feathered wing,
With cawing and clawing and no chicken to sing.
He flattened her there in the cloudy dust,
While his passions were consumed with a rigorous lust;
And the poor little hen sat looking dazed,
While the rooster stalked off, proud of his ways.
I guess that's the nature of the nasty bird,
He's best in a soup pot where his noise won't be heard.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 3:22 PM
A marvelous cautionary tale! It reminds me of the famous definition of taxation... how to pluck the most feathers from the largest number of chickens with the least amount of noise! BRAVO, Lizzie!! :)
Ball Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 7:28 PM
Loved this one my friend. Really good imagery. And I do agree there are a few roosters who need to accompany some dumplings. God Bless, JB
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 12:52 PM
I enjoyed reading the humor in this one which I think is also metaphoric...I have written one or more about the rooster..From a childhood experience...I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Sara
Sadberry Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 8:10 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Ahhh, Another One of Those Subliminal Hate Types of Verse Befitting of The Crowd Wherein Does Sooo Dwell &, The Nature of The Beast Rises Again *^_#* Is That What Your Beauty Was Trying to Convey, My Dear Precious Elizabeth Because, Your Radiance Surely Stirred My Spirit; Kudos!” === My Love Unto You & Yours, Always & Forever, Jasper *
Sumler Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 4:10 PM
You surely capture the arrogance of this cocky bird! Nice write Elizabeth. I must say I sure do miss reading your wonderful work. Consumed with new work hours and I've been away from the soup and haven't posted anything new for a while. I'm Super Happy that you kept in touch with me through reading my work. In the future I think I'm gonna write a poem and call it Super Happy, cause that's how your comments made me feel through these trying times! Thanks Elizabeth!
J.T. Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 2:59 PM
wow. this is witty and reminiscent of Dr. Seuss. Well done.
Foulk Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 2:28 PM
this reminds me of a pet rooster I had. then one day my mom made chicken for dinner, I asked her where was Rin Tin Tin at and she told me your eating him, i stopped eating chicken for a long time after that. you wrote a good poem enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on Lonely Man on a Park Bench.
Zzzzz Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 11:26 AM
A fun write, but it has a serious side too. Some lusty chaps might say, "Lucky Rooster!" but in the realm of humans, love-making should be reciprocal, of course. Good write. xoxo Robert.
Horne Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 11:08 AM
LOL, witty piece, Elizabeth. Our neighbour has started keeping hens but promises there won't be a rooster!
Mehta Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 10:19 AM
Nice allegorical tale to convey the message, elizabeth
Cooke Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 6:41 AM
love the last line, another lovely write steven
Sivey Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 2:35 AM
Nice story line, thought it was superb!! Poor hens, what can they do? Maybe the big bad wolf will stop by. Thanks for sharing!!
Poet Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 2:34 AM
I love this beautiful rhyming write .You conveyed a message in this allegorical write.Enjoyed very much.
K. Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 1:45 AM
Ooh wow... what an ending for that rooster! Very interesting take on the rooster, and this had me gripped til the end-- and wow, thank you so much for all your kind words in my poems, reading your comments made me smile so much :) Thank you...:)
Smith Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 12:40 AM
Sorry, I see it from the rooster's viewpoint. If those hens want eggs that hatch, he's got a lot of work to do. I do agree, a little foreplay would help. Great poem. My grandpa kept chickens, and I can see his rooster in your poem.
Johnson Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 12:17 AM
Cooking pot for a dumb rooster, catch him pluck him like we youster, job here for the underchook, revenge is sweet, a rooster cooked... great poem babe, Don
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 11:39 PM
I LOVE this. It's so cool. That was funny: "he'd paddle her behind" It made me giggle.
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