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The Rooster

The Rooster

He strutted ‘cross the barnyard tall and proud,
away from all the bustle of the crowd;
the other roosters in the yard felt cowed,
to him they meekly stepped aside and bowed.

Rhode Island Red to others he was known;
the yard’s top bird, to all he wanted shown.
One day a pullet walking on her own
approached red rooster standing all alone.

     “Dear sir you’re quite the standout in this room
      all smartly clad and dressed in bright red plume
      and standing by yourself may I assume
      you’re unattached and lonely, I presume.”

              Replied the rooster, “Dear cannot you see,
              that others always step aside for me,
              and I’m the one, I think you would agree
              that any hen I wanted, it would be.”

     “Oh, really,” she replied with snarky grin,
     “then why I ask your party seems quite thin,
      and I’m the only caller who’s within;
      perhaps it’s time that you and I begin.” 

             “My dear young hen you’re simply not my type;
              you’re far too ordinary is my gripe,
              and I prefer a hen who’s much more ripe
              for I must always live up to my hype.”

     “I see you standing proudly in your frock,
      and I can see you’ve been around the block;
      you’re nothing but an old conceited cock,
      and you deserve a nagging hen to rock.”


June 27, 2019
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James Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 4:53 AM
Oh I just love this one John, I did laugh out loud when I read the last two lines lol. A wonderful fun poem and really enjoyed. Another fav for me. Hugs, Emilia : )
Gondolf Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 10:46 AM
Glad I was able to make you laugh, Emilia, I was in a humorous mood when I wrote this one. Thanks for saving it to your favorites! Hugs, John
Craig Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 9:42 AM
Most entertaining. I had a Rhode Island Red Rooster when I was young and he was as mean as hell.
Gondolf Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Thanks, Michael, I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale. Yes, roosters can be mean. John
Chiri Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 7:02 AM
John I really enjoyed this one! Congrats on your HM!;)
Gondolf Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Thank you, Bren! Hugs
La France Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:01 AM
John, your personification is wonderful and delightful to read. Congratulations on your Podium Place in Brian's FFI Blog Series today.
Gondolf Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 12:26 PM
Thank you, Constance! It seems like you and Wendy are dominating Brian's Blog FFI Series. Tania and I have had several selected, I wonder if anyone else is even participating? Poetry hugs my friend, John
Kitchin Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 3:44 PM
This is so fun and entertaining John, congratulations on your first place win!
Gondolf Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Thank you so much, Tania, I’m glad you enjoyed my story. John
Nicole Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 8:08 PM
The Rooster has Won!!! Yippee!!! You have too, my dear friend. :) Congratulations John. I am smiling. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, Brandy, I always enjoy hearing from you. All my best. John
Leiser Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 12:18 PM
What a creative, entertaining poem you have written, John! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Congrats on your top win! :)
Gondolf Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 12:31 PM
Thank you so much, Laura, I'm glad you enjoyed my little story. John
Adams Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 12:17 PM
back to say congrats on your win my friend! :) hugs
Gondolf Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 12:24 PM
Thank you, Sandy! Hugs
Mcgee Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 11:23 AM
This is so fun. Great writing! Congrats on your win.
Gondolf Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Thank you, Jeanne, I'm glad you enjoyed my little story. John
Ibeh Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 11:02 AM
I absolutely loved this, John:-) So masterfully done! Great storytelling. Congrats on your top win in my contest!
Gondolf Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Thanks so much, Edward, I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale. Thanks for hosting this fun contest. John
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 6:49 PM
Hello John Gondolf, I think she put him in his place. have a nice evening my friend.
Gondolf Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 7:38 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene, I appreciate you. John
Rodrigues Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 7:47 PM
John, you are a great storyteller!
Gondolf Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 9:02 PM
Thank you, Kim, I appreciate it. Your thoughts bring a smile. John
Sergi Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 3:07 PM
Beautiful poem, John! They say that pride goeth before the fall.
Gondolf Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 8:56 PM
Thanks, Ralph, glad you enjoyed it. John
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 1:42 AM
Oh my John, this was simply delightful. I love the way roosters strut their stuff. You have captured the spirit of this animal to a tee! I must put this gem in my Faves my friend! I hope Edward appreciates it as much as I do! I hope to see it a top winner! : ) xxoo
Gondolf Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 4:28 AM
Thank you for the wonderful comments, Connie, I appreciate it. And thanks for putting it into your favorites. All the best my friend. John
Foster Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 9:20 PM
A wonderful story, highlighted in bright fun words. Excellent poem. Ann
Gondolf Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 9:30 PM
Thank for, Ann, I’m glad you had fun with my humorous tale. All the best. John
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 1:55 PM
He certainly is full of himself! This was great personification, John.
Gondolf Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate your comments and visit. John
Proxenos Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 2:10 PM
LOL LOL - you made me laugh so much John - this poems is such fun and the last verse says it all - well penned - should be a win for sure! Hugs, Jennifer.
Gondolf Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Thank you, Jenn, I'm glad I brought you some laughter today. Sometimes poetry should just be fun, right? All my best to you. Hugs, John
Adams Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 12:33 PM
i must admit you made me laugh at the end....cute rooster story, best of luck to you in the contest although i think this one will do rather well! :) hugs
Gondolf Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 12:50 PM
Thank you, Sandy, I've know a few pompous, conceited people like this in my life. I always enjoy seeing them get put in their place. John
Nicole Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 8:33 PM
:) I am softly giggling. This is soooo cute and soooo clever. Very Creative my dear friend. Love this HEN putting Him in His Place. The Rooster with Attitude!! I must save this to read again, when I need a good laugh. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 8:58 PM
Thank you for your thoughts, B, sometimes a pompous, conceited rooster needs to be put in his place. Glad you enjoyed my sense of humor. John
Bauer Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 2:15 PM
excellent entry, john! i enjoyed every verse! best of luck in the contest...
Gondolf Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene, I'm glad you enjoyed it. All the best. John
Cunningham Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Love the humour John, still a hint of romance in it though lol. Good luck. Tom
Gondolf Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate your comments. John
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 7:55 AM
you had me laughing out loud with your humourous rhyme John, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Gondolf Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Thanks, Jan, something a little different from my pen. I'm glad I brought some laughter to you this morning. All my best. John
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