The Rocks At Edale

Because the stones
are wind submissive, water pliant;
turned on wheels of air,
they remind me of village girls
broad buttocks, love handles,
rolling hips.  Not like the bony walkers
that climb up here.

Their nakedness is fashioned
by a grinding tenderness.
I sample that roundness,
let my warmth kiss the curves.
Sit next to a pretty one,  
eat a ham sandwich,
think fondly of the plump barmaid
in the valley below.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Amadore Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 11:16 AM
I enjoyed your poem and appreciated the deftness of your anthropomorphic imagery -- the product of a fertile and earthy mind.
Ashford Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Thank you Leo, yes it has often been said of me 'that I have a particularly earthy mind!' :-) Obliged to you for your kind comments.
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