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The Rocks At Edale

Because the stones are wind submissive, water pliant; turned on wheels of air, they remind me of village girls broad buttocks, love handles, rolling hips. Not like the bony walkers that climb up here. Their nakedness is fashioned by a grinding tenderness. I sample that roundness, let my warmth kiss the curves. Sit next to a pretty one, eat a ham sandwich, think fondly of the plump barmaid in the valley below.

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Date: 1/23/2020 11:16:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem and appreciated the deftness of your anthropomorphic imagery -- the product of a fertile and earthy mind.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 1/23/2020 11:22:00 AM
Thank you Leo, yes it has often been said of me 'that I have a particularly earthy mind!' :-) Obliged to you for your kind comments.

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