The Robin

At the
                                          foot
                                            of 
                                            the
                                           cross
                                              a
                                            bird
                                            came
                                              to 
                                            sing
                For his friend some comfort for to bring
                A tiny droplet fell and splashed his chest
                                            soft
                                           words
                                            from 
                                           tired
                                            lips
                                            Fly
                                           high
                                            fly
                                            free
                                            sing
                                              to
                                             the
                                            child
                                               as
                                              you
                                            sang
                                              to
                                              me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/28/2010 9:19:00 PM
OH, how lovely a thought of how he became robin redbreast, Daniel. such creativity! LUv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2010 1:53:00 PM
I finished the easy cheesy poem...let me know if it is too stupid??
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2010 7:05:00 AM
So nice to see u on my comments page again Daniel.. hope it will be a daily occurrence now that u are posting again.. with luv..ciao..
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2010 7:01:00 AM
This is an inspiring "shape" poem, Daniel. Please send that robin my way. I would love to hear it sing. Beautiful writing, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2010 1:25:00 PM
enjoyed!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2010 1:07:00 PM
AWESOME and so good to see u back Daniel..my friend.. have missed your intense poetry ... this one is a perfect concrete piece with a phenomenal message so beautifully stated.. enjoyed my friend.. please keep in touch.. luv.. ciao...
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2010 12:31:00 PM
Hello Daniel: What a wonderful poem of faith. Fantastic!!! Have a very good day. Yours truly: Sheol
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter