The Robin

At the
                                          foot
                                            of 
                                            the
                                           cross
                                              a
                                            bird
                                            came
                                              to 
                                            sing
                For his friend some comfort for to bring
                A tiny droplet fell and splashed his chest
                                            soft
                                           words
                                            from 
                                           tired
                                            lips
                                            Fly
                                           high
                                            fly
                                            free
                                            sing
                                              to
                                             the
                                            child
                                               as
                                              you
                                            sang
                                              to
                                              me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 9:19 PM
OH, how lovely a thought of how he became robin redbreast, Daniel. such creativity! LUv, Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 1:53 PM
I finished the easy cheesy poem...let me know if it is too stupid??
Sweetheart Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 7:05 AM
So nice to see u on my comments page again Daniel.. hope it will be a daily occurrence now that u are posting again.. with luv..ciao..
Devonshire Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 7:01 AM
This is an inspiring "shape" poem, Daniel. Please send that robin my way. I would love to hear it sing. Beautiful writing, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 1:25 PM
enjoyed!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 1:07 PM
AWESOME and so good to see u back Daniel..my friend.. have missed your intense poetry ... this one is a perfect concrete piece with a phenomenal message so beautifully stated.. enjoyed my friend.. please keep in touch.. luv.. ciao...
Moribund Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 12:31 PM
Hello Daniel: What a wonderful poem of faith. Fantastic!!! Have a very good day. Yours truly: Sheol
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