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The Road Up


The Road Up

The road up
hugs the side of a hill 
and steep slopes fall 
into dark gullies far below. 
In places, tree trunks still wear 
the blackened scars of past fires.
Further up, you enter a long archway
of shade, trees are taller and tower 
in full height above the road - 
ferns wave their extended fronds
as you pass - long ribbons of bark
hang down through the low cloud.
The air is damp and cold
with high country breath.
You stop, leave the car and walk
a little way into the forest.

All is quiet except for muted
forest sounds playing out 
in a soft chorus on the edges
of your hearing. There are times
when you feel a sense of arrival,
that all the pathways
of your life have led to here.
No grand finale waits to mark 
the moment, just an indifference 
as if you were only ever a part
of a greater whole, the realisation
that you are not alone 
but lost sometimes 
in one of the many rooms 
of your home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Beaufort Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Paul, you've made a very interesting description and linked this trip to a philosophical journey and story in life that seems accurate to me. Thanks for making this so easy to understand and appreciate. Smiles!!
Willason Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 5:41 AM
Hi Duke, so pleased to have received your kind words..thankyou for reading and giving the poem some thought. Indeed carried smiles for which I am grateful. Take care... Paul
Lane Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 2:59 AM
I would feel perfectly at home in a natural setting of such lush surroundings. Just as you make it sound... as if you'd come home.
Lane Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 5:47 AM
You're very welcome, Paul. Whatever feeds your fine poetry, keep feasting on it.
Willason Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 5:38 AM
Prior to moving to the coast, we lived in such surroundings...quite stunning. Summer always a worry though with the threat of bushfires. Such scenery is only an hours drive away. I seem to connect to both...they feed my poetry. Thanks dear Lin for reading and yr comments.
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