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The Road To Mordor

The daylight fades now; soon the moon will glide Across the canvas of the sky that, wide And black, spans far above. Below, we bide Our time and wait. I glance from side to side At my companions on this dreadful ride. These are the haunted woods where many died. The path is treacherous, and with each stride Becomes more so. I think foul creatures cried While circling overhead. We have to hide. I fear we cannot really trust our guide. Perhaps it would be better to divide: Have some go on, and others turn aside To draw off the pursuit. We must decide And each walk to our doom with fear and pride. 2/13/2017 For contest Monorhyme Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 7/24/2018 10:01:00 PM
A powerful write, Agnes. Congrats.
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Date: 2/19/2017 4:50:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2017 4:50:00 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Date: 2/18/2017 9:18:00 PM
Great write, Agnes! Congrats!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 4:51:00 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 2/18/2017 6:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done monorhyme.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 4:51:00 PM
Thanks, Janis.
Date: 2/18/2017 6:30:00 PM
Very good Monorhyme scary, Agnes, congratulations on your win :) hug Eve
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Date: 2/19/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 2/15/2017 3:40:00 PM
I think this is great, Agnes. Such an imaginative subject. Good luck in the contest. +7 // Barry
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Date: 2/19/2017 4:54:00 PM
Thanks, Barry.
Date: 2/14/2017 7:45:00 AM
This is absolutely great Agnes, it's not only monorhyme, it also paints the atmosphere of Mordor so well! Good luck in the contest.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 4:54:00 PM
Thanks, Darren.
Date: 2/13/2017 11:02:00 PM
A 7 for this well-written, dramatic piece, Agnes! Janice
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 4:55:00 PM
Thanks, Janice.
Date: 2/13/2017 8:58:00 PM
Mistress of the rings Dear Agnes, well done...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/13/2017 9:40:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie.
Date: 2/13/2017 5:43:00 PM
You did this challenge VERY Well, AGnes. I pity Shadow having to judge only ten winners.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/13/2017 9:39:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 2/13/2017 4:03:00 PM
I am not a Tolkein fan Agnes but I did enjoy your descriptive rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/13/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. That is just what came out when I tried the monorhyme ;)
Date: 2/13/2017 3:22:00 PM
This was really nice Agnes. This should do well in the contest.
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Date: 2/13/2017 2:51:00 PM
I like this, Agnes! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim
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