The Road Home

On the way to Parkview hospital,
while driving along the Pacific rim,
under a thick blanket of fog,
our car pushed hard against a northeast wind

A winding road through muddy hills
The highway strewn with mud and soggy leaves
from patches of leaning eucalyptus
Wild scatterings of tall and ancient trees

Around each curve a reddish glare of headlights,
forked, and slashed their garish designs 
upon your father's anxious face,
I took deep breaths and counted time

Lights accentuated the grimace of his angst
He kept silent, in such firm distraction,
and curiously  seeing his face light up in the dark,
eased the grimace of my own contractions

Silhouettes of signs and trees
flashing by in lightning's fury
Windshield wipers keeping rhythm
indicating "hurry!....hurry!"
 
Our new found light showed us where to turn
and soon we curved around the bay,
the winding road led where we learned
young confidence... can show  the way

You found your way into our arms
to a place that owned our hearts
You wrapped us with a cord of charms
and changed to light, a night so dark

When morning came to take you home
The sun broke through across the land
And new adventures waited then
A brand new winding road began




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For Kelly Deschler's  Contest: "Just Down The Road"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:16 PM
well done..SKAT
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Congrats Carrie!! Wonderful write...was not sure where it was leading to, but finally you gave us such a happy ending. From apprehension to joy. // paul
Mehta Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 10:58 AM
It's a nice take on the theme of the contest. Congrats on the win, carrie
Onclaud Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 8:13 AM
this wonderful piece has a fast, thrilling pace to it so well crafted, carrie... big cheers on your high win.. huggs
Walker  Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 9:23 PM
Nice Carrie. Congratulations on your high marks in Kelly's contest. Verlena
Deschler Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 7:04 PM
This was a suspenseful story with a very happy ending, and you told it so well, Carrie! Congratulations on your first place win! Well deserved!
A   Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 12:15 PM
Carrie, i like the way you pulled off the contest.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD
Macfarlane Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 8:55 PM
Carrie...this is so touchingly beautiful, I love it! Hugs
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 4:23 PM
A beautifully written stories Carrie..congrats.
Dillard Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 10:19 AM
The Beatles were fun, but not to compare with the the birth of our children as they begin their own 'Long and Winding Road' by paving ours! RAY
Haick Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 9:20 PM
One of my favs., Carrie! Beautiful song. I'm not sure which one of them wrote this but sounds something John and Paul would write! Beautiful! Congratulations on a super win! Love, Annalise
Roberts Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 7:51 PM
Lovely Carrie, we both chose the same song......Seren
Williams Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 2:31 PM
Carrie congrats on your win, I loved this journey first time around, as always an excellent write from you...David
Ober Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Carrie, as always you have spun a beautiful and goosebump-inducing tale. You took this title and turned it into a stunning piece! Congrats on your win in my contest :)
Konos Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM
After reading your account of the Long and Winding Road I know I was sitting in the car seat beside you for how else would I have become so tense and anxious for our arrival.........How else....
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:13 PM
Wooow ... a really good and interesting poem Carrie.- Luck in contest ! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:35 AM
wow, Carrie. I could read a whole book of poems like this one. Just relaxing in my bed or bathtub. You really know how to express life's shining moments most eloquently.
Ryerson Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 4:44 PM
'Don't leave me waiting here... Lead me to your door'...If this wasn't origionally a quatrain I'd love to see the first version!...Beautiful poem from one of my all-time favorite songs and I'm very glad where that road led you (I'm still trying to come up with something and the deadline is approaching!) - Tim
Horne Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 9:20 AM
love this beautiful write, Carrie - a sure winner here. I love this song too
Sanders Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 6:38 AM
I love how this poem travels Excellent!!!! Hey you should check out a young poet name Margherita Russo
Peranteau Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 5:14 AM
A most wonderful dedication to your love pictured...O....so well ! *smiles* Have a beautiful week my friend ! Much love, james
Williams Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 7:59 AM
Carrie I love this, it is a great journey....David
Wesley Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 9:38 PM
I sense a baby has been born; such a moment to celebrate and a new road to walk. Lovely verse Carrie.
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