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The River Remembers Sky

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Written: August 14, 2025 ************ River answers cloud with shimmer, and cloud with a hush that folds into silver— a breath that rises through its forgetting, still and wild, akin to an unspoken name. Between echo and echo, intellection unbuttons its syntax, and the ancient self thins. into filaments of looking. Now the wind tunnels through the reeds, Now dusk unthreads the horizon. Stones lean inward. Five crows arrive as verdicts in the birch canopy. Owls blink—eyes such a rusted lanterns— and twilight drips from their wings. The empty skiff moves back and forth. It's a low hum in the current. a resonance that deepens until it chimes with absence. When it docks, the message it carries is an apology, folded in dusk. And so, as a glint of practiced grace, The day’s last gold recedes. in the hills behind our silence. What I wish from you tonight is not comfort, but a touch that remembers the storm. I wish your breath to lift my name. same as ash from the altar— to feel, when your fingers trace the fault lines in my chest, our empire of longing crumble into wilderness. Above us, the planets slip. as secrets across the dark, and the stars, pale and multiplying, defy the night with their stillness— defining its scrap by refusing to move.

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Date: 8/14/2025 6:24:00 PM
Wow. A fav from me, for sure - breathtaking
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Date: 8/14/2025 5:18:00 PM
this poem seems 'layered' to me in places. I also felt as if your poem was one of romance, as breathtaking as how the river remembers the sky. Such a powerful title. These lines spoke to me: In the hills behind our silence. What I wish from you tonight is not comfort, but a touch that remembers the storm. I wish your breath to lift my name. same as ash from the altar— A masterpiece! Texas hugs, Sara
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