The River inspired by the poem of Jibonananda Das

The rye mustard field, glowing with a  morning diva, faded in colors within afternoon 
The river runs just beside ;

“O reverie! What shall the song be in the chanting verse, unsung in me and thee!”
The branches of the oak tree , trace upon chest of yours, whence
The tree shade adores you in blue
Patsy sounds in farther and farther a try, follow through
These for  having an echo in those stalking sounds, whence together , sounds cry
Was there ever a river meandering nearby?

“O reverie! What shall the song be in the chanting verse, unsung in me and thee!”

You , my soulmate, a fall to befall in shape, mine to undermine
The farther I run away to shy - you trace me back there with your toddler efforts to intertwine
I hear your foamy shore, sounds of me with my child, daylong, a silly whim to be around awhile
Enchantance overflowing with eloquence (seemingly so)

Eloquence and ongoing eloquence never a bit tiresome 
This very river
A flock of fishes rainbow colors on the river chest 
The herd of flamingo , white lilies the remotest oasis around the deepest river basin
Men did not intervene, as these, are never to be seen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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