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The River Dancer

the river dancer smooth he is all under currents whirling eddies bow with flare catch up the mind in wild despair precariously steps along the crest then soars across the rocks again rattling, tumbling over the brink into the silence of a pool to tarry for a stillness... then gone

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Date: 9/23/2017 5:31:00 AM
That's life, is it not, though many don't reach the heights described in your verse. Those who do are surely blessed, before the inevitable stillness.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/23/2017 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Peter, you are wise to see life in that river's dancing.

Book: Shattered Sighs