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Pure, river water. Even the bridge stands, a horse. Crosses the water. Written May 30, 2021 All Yours (Jun 1) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Ann Foster

Date: 6/2/2021 7:52:00 AM

Great correlation... love horses... well written. Ann

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/2/2021 8:18:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words, dear; I'm glad you like the haiku. I like horses too.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/1/2021 11:34:00 AM

I enjoyed this wonderful haiku, Lasaad. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Evelyn

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/2/2021 8:16:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words, dear Evelyn.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/31/2021 1:18:00 AM

Must be a shallow river. Lovely haiku.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/31/2021 8:42:00 AM

Thanks for the comment Victor, actually it's an esoteric river. Blessings

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/30/2021 8:50:00 PM

Hi Lasaad, You've penned a lovely, meaningful haiku that complimented your photo just right! Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexandria and

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/31/2021 8:44:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Alexis. Your nice comments always shed more beauty on my poems. Blessings and warm hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/30/2021 3:57:00 PM

The beauty lies not on what we see here but on the hidden meaning, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Excellent. Blessings

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/30/2021 4:32:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear friend, Demetrios. Your kind words shed even more beauty on my poem. Blessings and best regards

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/30/2021 2:28:00 PM

I love the strength of bridges equal to the strength of water, we need to be grateful for the things that sustain our bulk, nice one Lasaad. Winning thoughts for you :)

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/30/2021 3:49:00 PM

Thank you, Rose, your nice words are much appreciated, blessings and hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2021 1:46:00 PM

nice description of the picture, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/30/2021 3:47:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, for the nice words, my very best regards