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The River

A canal, far away,
was built many years ago 
for the ships' passage

between two oceans. 
A river, near me, slowly 
flows, floats the barges.

And, years ago, 
this dove- colored river 
was open for the wars.

Today, distant lights 
on the river are a moon's
glow, and one or two

are stars, that poke the dusk
through the hush of falling snow,
to the Summer warmth

of a shelter, where 
onyx tinctured mares have wings,
to fly through at night.

Their snow-white wings
are soft as flour, and their hooves
are as magical

as the Ruby Shoes 
in the dream.They tear through, weave
tatters into fear.

They tat a net,
with the silky gleam of tinsel,
to catch the diamonds

that prick the sky, cut
into an artist's canvas,
who paints this nightmare..

the very edge of 'morn
spills cream hues, lifts up a gold
rose. The river sparkles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/11/2021 3:37:00 PM
A pleasure to find your lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Jennifer~
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Date: 11/8/2020 5:27:00 PM
Jennifer, what a lovely, exciting poem. It is truly worthy of the recognition it is receiving. Congratulations on your win! May I be so bold as to invite you to submit to my 2021 Visionary contest?
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Date: 11/8/2020 1:40:00 PM
Congrats on a wonderful win. I like the interesting style of taking one line down to the next stanza!
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Date: 11/8/2020 8:02:00 AM
Lovely imagery Jennifer. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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