The Ritz

'Ritz Tower, Night' 1920's      Painted by Georgia O'Keefe




They closed the day behind them, and scurried to the hive
Inside a honeycomb of cells, a filing cabinet filled of lives
The night in black and blue enshrouds the city's tallest mast
As evening beckoned heads to rest, with yellow window glass
That overlooks the narrow streets, from a tower of the past



For Brian Strand's contest: Five Line Ekphrasis

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/5/2011 4:52:00 PM
I have never seen this BUT I do love Georgia O'Keefe as a woman as well as an artist! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/3/2011 2:57:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on an exciting first place win in Brian's contest my friend.. super creation.. luv..
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Date: 6/3/2011 2:33:00 PM
Nice win with this creative piece. Mike
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Date: 6/3/2011 7:37:00 AM
glory winning wishes to you, carrie... a fisrt of its kind! sweets cheers:) huggs!
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on first place in Brians contest~~
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Date: 6/3/2011 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's " contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/27/2011 10:19:00 AM
I am not familiar with this painting Carrie but I could picture it because of your wonderful write-- sounds like an intriguing painting-- and Thank YOU sweetie for your touching words in my poem-- I am lucky to have you as a friend-- thank you and I am doing ok -- it was just for that moment :) & I nope, I wasn't able to read when John Heck was there but the last show before that I did :) and your poetry deserves airtime sweetie! without a doubt!! Enjoy your week and hugs to you :)
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Date: 5/26/2011 7:03:00 AM
Thank you for sharing the heart of your poetry with us here at Poetrysoup. I enjoyed reading your fasinating poetry this morning and I look forward to reading more of your poetry Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:26:00 PM
Beautifully worded and penned the visual with apt images, Carrie
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