The Risks of Love

THE   RISKS  OF  LOVE  


It was a hostile land in those days, singing
Of our dream of a house, clinging 
To something we could believe in,
Rooted in the soft rocks so that even
The breath of the earth itself was muffled.
Precarious, tenacious, cliff-edged  -
Dwelling there for three score years of nights
And never a pause taking from its delights;
Never choosing to deny the thrill of waking,
Or surrendering our siren-held souls, or shaking
Off our thraldom.  'Twas the perfect foil
To the ever-present harshness and soil
Of the reality on solid ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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August 10, 2015 at 6:31 PM
SIDNEY, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
A. Sharma Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 1:54 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Sidney! Great work!
Leblanc Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 7:41 PM
Let me be the first to comment on your poem. I appreciate the fact that I might have to read it more than once in extracting all the meaning. I feel that it was very nicely done... George LeBlanc
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