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Like an almighty cauldron, Curling and twirling, Stirred by the sea, It came bashing, As a torrential torrent Pounding endlessly.

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Date: 12/22/2023 9:47:00 AM
Great image Svvie! I can hear it from here. :)
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Date: 12/25/2023 3:07:00 PM
I think he read my poem before creating the picture Laf ! Thanks for your comment dear friend.
Date: 12/18/2023 12:00:00 PM
Dear SV, I was enchanted by the graceful cadence and enchanting beat of the words as they flowed. The poem painted a vivid picture of perilous weather that resembled an awful cauldron, raging and roiling due to the influence of the vast ocean. It fell tirelessly onto the shores, hitting constantly like an unyielding tempest.
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Date: 12/18/2023 4:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much Lasaard. Wen
Date: 12/18/2023 7:31:00 AM
A very descriptive poem of dangerous weather. I enjoyed the flow of words that ran in beautiful meter.
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Date: 12/18/2023 4:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much Hilda. Wen
Date: 12/18/2023 1:08:00 AM
Works so beautifully with the image, enjoyed x
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Date: 12/18/2023 4:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much D. Wen
Date: 12/18/2023 12:50:00 AM
i coukd hear the poem, from France, specially because i live in Brittany, near the sea, and tempests, a beautiful poem to share, thanks poet
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Date: 12/18/2023 4:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much Yann. Best wishes from Wen

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