The Rim Remembers
I drank coffee from your cup—
still warm where your mouth had pressed,
the rim embossed
with your lower lip’s faint crest.
Now rust stains every silver spoon,
fingers drum restless rhythms
on our kitchen’s worn lagoon.
In checkout lines, your laughter flickers—
a candle’s flame in strangers’ whispers.
I turn, but find no spark, no face—
just hollow aisles, silent grace.
For briefest moments,
you almost grace this place.
Time ticks like your mother’s clock—
missing beats in measured shock.
I count the silences
that fold the past into what’s next,
bridging spaces
between love’s loss
and life’s complex.
You were the fever
breaking dawn’s fragile thread,
and I, the tangled sheets
still holding echoes of your stead,
learning to smooth
where hope once bled.
Your voice lingers
in static between waves,
almost here,
then swept away.
I’m learning the weight
of absence, how it falls
like coins in pockets—
weighty, worn familiar,
softly chiming
as I step forward
into morning’s timing.
Copyright © Saeed Koushan | Year Posted 2025
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