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The Right Move

I am just passing through what about you are you waiting for something more special I suggest you not wait too much longer don't wait too late pass through the pearly gate Curtis Moorman 12 November 2011 For the contest - Double Tetractys

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/20/2011 4:36:00 PM

There were sooo many different angles with this topic, Curtis..The question u pose in the first tetra is so TRUE. The world is waiting for something more special and the Lord is right there and willing to meet them and shower them with gifts galore. In the 2nd tetra you are trying to keep em on the straight and narrow..your efforts thru poetry are noteworthy! Great idea here! Gwendolen

Lisa Cooper

Date: 11/13/2011 8:41:00 PM

enjoyed reading your talented tetractys

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 10:19:00 PM

C.M., good luck in the contest,.... Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 12:30:00 PM

May we all pass thru that pearly gate, Curtis (but not too soon, I hope!!!) Good idea for your tetractys!