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The Right Man - Collaboration

Prince of no state But of my heart Reader of the stars Interpreter of my eyes Someone just like me Will enter my life Not late, but very soon And together we will build A palace on the top Of that lush green mountain Our Kingdom will be named Eden And we will be its sole rulers. ________________________ August 26, 2020 For contest: MAX 12 LINES - poem-inspired prompt Poetry Contest, sponsored by Line Gauthier. Original poem: THE WISE WOMAN Reader of the stars Sees in crystal ball Woman of your dreams Will enter your life A princess no doubt Someone just like me

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Robert Lindley

Date: 12/24/2020 8:45:00 AM

A fine morn it is. To find the beauty and see the glow in the very fine poem that you have created and gifted we readers with, my friend. A fav-- God bless..

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/8/2021 2:33:00 AM

Aw no, you are blessed with a very aesthetic mind, that sees beauty in everything. My must is still in the category of illiterates. Trust me.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/12/2020 1:07:00 PM

I like the way you wove line's poem in with yours so seemlessly:-) hugs jan xx

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/12/2020 1:34:00 PM

Thanks Jan

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/31/2020 6:32:00 AM

I'm certain Line will enjoy your entry Paghunda, very creative. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One

Date: 8/30/2020 8:41:00 AM

I hope you meet the right man.... Would be nice to see you write a ghazal for my contest ..

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/30/2020 9:05:00 AM

Would have love to... But I can not write Ghazal. way too difficult too compose.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2020 2:45:00 PM

wonderful collaboration poem!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/30/2020 9:06:00 AM

Thank you Andrea