The Ride

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I had this image in my head of a worn but good looking guy sitting at a counter in a diner with a woman trying to get him to stay in town.  I don't know where it came from but I had to tell his story.  Hope you enjoy The Ride.

THE RIDE

I got a horse named Sam, a dog named Joe, 
and my old Chevy truck.
In the front of my trailer is my saddle and bridle 
with a horseshoe thrown in for luck.

Got my bedroll and boots, one change of clothes, 
just enough money for gas.
I’m on my way to the next rodeo, 
so Darlin’, I think I’ll pass

Your kind invitation to hang around here, 
and take up a new line of work
That wouldn’t involve breakin’ my bones. 
To refuse makes me sound like a jerk.

But listen a moment to what’s in my heart, 
and maybe you’ll understand
Why I keep on ridin’ them wild buckin’ broncs 
while lookin’ for a soft place to land.

When I was eighteen I thought about gettin’ a job 
and workin’ from nine to five.
But I couldn’t find anything I could do 
that would keep me feelin’ alive.

Now it’s twenty years later and I ain’t got much 
to show for the years in between.
But it don’t matter when I get to the gate, 
‘cause it starts all over again.

I hear the roar of the rodeo crowd.
I smell the dust risin’ high in a cloud.
And there’s a thrill that starts to tickle my veins
when I hear them start to call out the names.

I know that soon I’m gonna be out there.
Win or lose, I’m not gonna care,
‘cause all I wanna do is make The Ride.
It’s all about The Ride.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/17/2017 3:43:00 PM
You tell a story with such freshness and reality that it soon attaches itself to our reality and we take partial ownership of the emotions poured forth. You managed to nicely capture the scene and the ambiance of the moment well. Good story with a wonderful flow of words and images. Emile. #7
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Beverly Read
Date: 5/31/2017 4:31:00 PM
Thank you Emile for your really nice comments. So glad you enjoyed it. Beverly
Date: 11/19/2016 1:06:00 PM
I liked reading this, Beverly. We don't have anything like rodeo in this country but you certainly give a vivid scene. Barry.
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Beverly Read
Date: 11/22/2016 6:15:00 PM
I've been to big rodeos and then we had a few of our own (always unexpected) with the horses my dad owned. They're very exciting and can be scary; those animals are large. So glad you enjoyed it. So sorry this is something you've missed. Beverly
Date: 11/15/2016 7:09:00 PM
Really enjoyed this. You tell it as if you have lived it. Great ride, SuZ
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Beverly Read
Date: 11/16/2016 5:54:00 PM
Hi Suz. Thank you so much. We did like to go to rodeos when I was young. My dad had horses and we rode them in the mountains on lengthy pack trips (couple of weeks). I never knew anyone like this guy, but saw a lot of cowboys at Kennedy Meadows. So when this guy came into my head I just had to write about him.
Date: 11/15/2016 3:30:00 PM
Sounds like a Garth brooks song, Beverly. I think it's sensational:)
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Date: 11/16/2016 5:49:00 PM
Daniel, yeah, I know it sounds like that. I don't even remember why I thought about this guy sitting in a diner. I wrote this in 2003 and actually thought about making it a song, but I'm not very good at that so it's a poem. Thanks so much for you complimentary comment. Beverly
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