The Richard Enigma

I'm rather hard to figure out
Not many really get what I'm about
I'd rather sit quietly than shout
I keep it real I'm not prone to pout
You might think me passive
Still I will act 
when others are subdued by doubt

Somewhat serious
Yet prone to smile
Not ecstatic I have my own style
If you need comfort I'll stay with you a while
Don't expect much talking 
I'm a listener on the emoticom dial

As a poet
I know the power of the word
In the end I like to hear and be heard
Like you I too have been burned
Within adversity there were things I learned

I am a dancer
Stepping out on pages
Quiet paper oragami cages
Traveling on thoughts
Floating through all my stages

Fast forward rewinding 
Pausing at my distance
Like the Borg victims there is no resistance
I breathe my thoughts with a certain persistence

If you look at me 
I might reflect you
Searching for answers
Seeing beyond dark corridors 
To places bright blue
Perhaps you as well 
Like me
are an enigma too!

Written April 8th.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ober Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 1:25 PM
I loved reading this one!! A glimpse into your creative mind. The Borg line brought a BIG smile to my face. I love Star Trek haha.
Ober Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 7:52 AM
TNG has always been my favourite too! Picard was the best :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:08 AM
I too am a fan, more so of Star Trek the next Generation. Captain Jean Luc Picard was my favorite Captain.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 1:49 PM
The winsome title drew me in. Oh I could relate to this poem soo much that i was surprised at the coincidental similarities for sir Im so like that, introvert n resesved yet quick to smile. Wow liked the line of the origami, witty. Kudos for the rhyming n wording! Cheers.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:10 AM
Sorry for the late response. Thanks for visiting.
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..A little to know about you..Congrats on your win..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:10 AM
A belated thanks Sara.
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 12:21 AM
You know the title alone is outstanding. I love it, makes me jealous. Why didn't I think about it? Love it. A smooth ending. Love it... Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:08 AM
A belated thanks Linda.
Poteet Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 10:51 AM
A worthy write; don't know you well, but this fits what I have seen here at PS. Congratulations, Richard, on being yourself, honest and relaxed about it.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Thanks a Reason, sorry somehow I missed your visit.
Nance Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 7:49 AM
You and your write is amazing. I really like that i am a dancer stanza, you do know the power of words and you use them so very well. It is a pleasure to read you ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:12 AM
You are kind Casarah, sorry I missed responding to this great comment.
Breidenthal Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 3:13 AM
The fourth stanza shows just how talented you are as a poet... you're a wonderful, unique and clever writer. I think it is wonderful that you are a listener. Wish more were that way! " If you look at me I might reflect you"...ooooh. Another nice line. Always, Laura
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:13 AM
I had to go back and read stanza four, I kinda like that one too. Thanks for the thoughtful comment.
Duncan Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 2:49 AM
Nicely done, a nice win as well. Reminds me of my Contradictions. Have a fab day ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:14 AM
Hi Debbie, it seems I missed a bunch of comments on this piece. Sorry for the late response.
Haight Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 8:56 PM
Nice to learn a little more about you through your bio poem, Richard! Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:15 AM
A belated thanks Sandra.
Roper Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rick . A 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:15 AM
Thanks for the blessing Eve. Sorry for the late response.
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 7:01 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Richard-) Hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:16 AM
Thanks for the congrats Jan, sorry for the late response.
Reams Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 10:37 PM
Congrats on your win Richard. You fit my husband really well. A great bio! Thank you for entering my contest.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 2:56 AM
Thanks for choosing this one Tammy.
Lariviere Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 3:26 PM
All of my personalities just loved this poem!!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:16 AM
Thanks my friend.
Atfield Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 1:36 PM
PS I love the self-analysis ( if that be it ) of “ The Richard Enigma ”. as for me they have said that I am an anomaly but never an “ Enigma ”. I guess we all have some label that projects and what others reflect.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 3:06 PM
Thanks again William. I think in the end each of us has our own anomalies. That's what makes the study of humans so interesting.
Vaso Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Can you please write my Bio? I will only ask one small favor, lie and exaggerate as much as is needed! As for the poem, I know I keep saying the same thing, but fantastic, just resonates so well!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Ha ha, you kill me Arthur!
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 11:25 PM
gosh, richard, I hope YOUR bio will inspire me to do a better job with MINE. I ditched my lame attempt at a bio by the decades. I gotta find a hook like you did with yours. This is just excellent!!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 8:21 AM
I have no doubt you will come up with something spectacular.
Kiser Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 5:40 PM
A wonderful enigma, you are, indeed. This was an exceptional read; I give it a "7"
Lamoureux Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 8:22 AM
What a nice comment, thanks M.L.
Nunez Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 5:09 PM
I liked your BIO, Rick. It's focused on your character and perception of yourself. Given us relatively new poets a glimpse of the Enigma that is you. :) Kim
Lamoureux Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Thanks Kim you are kind, I'm pleased you like my poem.
La France Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 10:59 AM
Richard, this bio of you is wonderful, a mix of qualities beautiful to me, there were so many awesome words and lines within this well penned poem, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry
Lamoureux Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 1:14 AM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your kind words.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 8:08 AM
Richard you are not an Enigma but simply a harmonized human being! Well done my friend!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 8:31 AM
Thanks Demetrios, I do appreciate the many varied experiences and thoughts that God has gifted me with. The definition you have provided regarding Harmony will be further contemplated.
Bear Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 6:09 PM
Enigma, yes. I know you well my son and you always bring more surprises into my life. You are a fav all the way 'round Much love Mom
Lamoureux Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Thats why you are my "Favorite" you understand me. I love you too!
Smith Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 3:22 PM
A fantastic bio Richard...You do have a good grasp of who you are and what I see is a great man/husband/friend/poet....a fav
Lamoureux Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 8:25 AM
It seems there is a certain bit of accuracy with the three letter code *lol*. Fortunate for me I am not a "Hazel" nut or a "Pee" nut! Hugs to you as well Jan.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 12:16 PM
I do hope this is bio contest Richard as it a brilliant description of the man we know and love here:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx (bit worrying the three letter code is NUT lol)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Yes it is for the contest, thanks Jan hugs to you as well.
Chircop Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 11:11 AM
'I am a dancer stepping out on pages,Quiet paper oragami pages,travelling on thoughts,floating through all my stages- WoWzer.I really love the shadow I see in this mirror..Ought to favour this exceptional bio.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 12:07 PM
Thanks Charmaine!
Manassian Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 10:53 AM
Yes, that's a fine description of my friend, Richard. Oh...you know him too? He's a sweetie pie. Give him my love and tell him...I'm an enigma too, though I'm loud and in your face....I lack the finer grace...my emotions all over the place...open book face...in love with romance and lace! :) Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 12:08 PM
I love your response! A big hug back to you Eileen.
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