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The Rhythm of the Falls

. Streams of liquid dreams fall in shades of blue on green to serenity ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Written: October 9, 2009 Inspired by: Raul Moreno’s Haiku contest and the Photo provided for the contest Awarded: 2nd Place

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Audrey Haick

Date: 11/5/2009 9:38:00 PM

Congratulations once more Elaine!! Peace and love, Audrey

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/27/2009 12:49:00 PM

Wow! This contest really got out some great creativity! I really love this drinkable haikus. This is lovely! Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 4:27:00 AM

Congratulations, Elaine, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely photograph. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/22/2009 10:18:00 AM

Dear Lady Elaine, LOVE THIS great Haiku...HG SOUP MAIL CALL

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/22/2009 9:07:00 AM

Dear Lady Elaine, Congratulations on YOUR Well deserved Second Place Win in Raul's Contest YOUR Awesome talent shines as a beacon for the novice such as myself You inspire my growth LOVE to YOU and YOURS ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG

Sue Mason

Date: 10/19/2009 5:04:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Elaine!

Marty Owens

Date: 10/19/2009 9:05:00 AM

This is beautiful..I wouldn't have wanted to judge this contest!! Congratulations...Marty

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/19/2009 7:57:00 AM

This is beautiful! I love your imagery! Congrats on your 2nd place win Lainie :) Thanks as well for your comments :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/18/2009 9:20:00 PM

Congratulations Elaine!! Beautiful imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Adell Foster

Date: 10/18/2009 8:19:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win Lanie, this is a very lovely work indeed :-) God Bless, always, Adell

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/18/2009 7:48:00 PM

CONGRATS! on your success. It is a very colorful haiku.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/17/2009 4:40:00 PM

Congratulations, Lainie! Great work! Love, Carolyn

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/17/2009 4:05:00 AM

Told you , it was a winner !! . Congrats ...

Brian Strand

Date: 10/17/2009 2:18:00 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest Elaine.Rgds Brian

Donna Golden

Date: 10/16/2009 10:06:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery, masterful phrasing. Congrats on your well-deserved win, Lanie! Hugs, Donna

Canny Amah

Date: 10/16/2009 7:53:00 PM

A million cheers on your win in the Rhythm of the Falls contest … Congrats!!! Take a pat on your back … Canny.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/16/2009 7:27:00 PM

nicely written, congrats on the win!!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/16/2009 4:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your WIN with this beautiful Haiku in Rauls contest! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2009 4:24:00 PM

Excellent description and well deserving this 2nd place win in Raul's contest!! Thank you for sharing for this beautiful poem! Congratulations, Elaine!! Love, Carrie