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The Rest of My Days

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. But before I do, please allow me to pray. For just as the sky has one brightest star. I’m forever in love with the person you are. Your heart is compassion in its truest form. Your lips are moist, tender and warm. Your eyes are as deep as deep can go. The kindest person I ever did know. Your soul is one that shines so bright. It gave me the desire to want to live right. You’re a Grandmother, Mother, Wife and lover. Who holds a grace and beauty like no other. When my life was as dark as dark could be. Your love led me to the Lord, which set me free. How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. Sweetheart, that feat shall take the rest of my days. Written for Tracy Decker’s “Inspired by the Masters” Poetry contest. Elizabeth Browning’s, “How Do I Love Thee”

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Date: 10/20/2008 12:58:00 PM
Superbly written, Michael! Truer love was never penned so well! Lonnie
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Date: 10/20/2008 5:55:00 AM
Your lovely tribute tells a story of devotion and love, and especially trust. What a blessed couple you are to have found that in each other! Good luck in the contest Michael. You picked the perfect poem to inspire your love. ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/19/2008 2:01:00 PM
Breathtaking, as always, you have a way with words. Keep up the great work. Lena
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Date: 10/19/2008 7:20:00 AM
Interesting take on “How Do I Love Thee” Michael and obviously written from the heart ….w ell done..
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Date: 10/18/2008 5:58:00 PM
WOW!!!!!!,what moving words, the universe, the world is truly blessed to have your incite. The lady in which this is attributed to is very lucky!!!!! Great artistry!!! thanks for posting this!!!
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Date: 10/18/2008 2:37:00 PM
such a lovely and captivating write, there is no doubt the depths of your love, I hope that one day I can have that kind of love as well, I hope that all is well with you and your family, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/18/2008 8:20:00 AM
Such a lovely tribute and once again so very well written. Love it. Regards Heidie
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Date: 10/18/2008 1:21:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Yes Duck tends to be a bit too laden with fat but done Chinese style in small pieces is fine.
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Date: 10/17/2008 10:27:00 PM
This sounds very pleasant, and was written with so much love and admiration. Thanks for your time Michael in reading my poem. Good luck :) Teri
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Date: 10/17/2008 7:16:00 PM
What a special, loving poem, Michael. Beautifukl - good luck. love Kristin
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Date: 10/17/2008 2:03:00 PM
Very beautiful....deep expression. Good luck in the contest!:) Regards, Sara
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Date: 10/17/2008 1:35:00 PM
a very beautiful and heart warming piece of poetry. thank you Michael for reading my angles carried them home and little girls birthday bike both true stories. your comments do mean so much to me.
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Date: 10/17/2008 1:29:00 PM
How perfect! That lucky lady you married. What a gorgeous tribute. Brilliant choice and well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/17/2008 12:47:00 PM
Hey thanks for the comments (btw. dont call me bro cause im a girl...so you can call me sis haha) I like this poem especially cause it rhymes so well :)
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Date: 10/17/2008 11:13:00 AM
Beautiful.....every word reveals so much love....Always, Christy
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