The Rendezvous

Cold and running out of light,
a winter's afternoon seems 
to gather the last few things 
to put on view -
clouds hurrying across the sky
with shapes that suggest a face 
or a butterfly
and hanging just above
the rooftops, the pale outline
of a daylight moon.

And the mood 
of a late afternoon settles here too
in the long shadows cast
by words across a page
through which the mind
passes, seeking out something 
to attach to, the glow 
of its own moon,
a flickering memory looking
for a breath
and ahead, lodged somewhere 
in the coming dark, a small,
indistinct blur, closing in
towards a rendezvous.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/19/2024 10:56:00 AM
A tryst with the moon... I've often written of that very thing. How delightful that would be. I always find a daylight moon intriguing, but needs telling, "Wait your turn for the sun is not yet ready to slumber.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/21/2024 2:45:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for such a lovely compliment, Paul but your poetry never bows to another.
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/21/2024 2:42:00 AM
We share a common love for that mysterious and gentle celestial companion...although I think you've almost made it your own in many of your splendid poems. I will pick up the crumbs dear friend...many thanks for giving my daylight moon a viewing. Valued.
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