The Reluctant Companion

The wife plans a spree to buy all
With husband on board at the mall
But as this takes place
He just looks for a space
To sit on a bench in the hall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/13/2016 6:50:00 PM
oh my, I have clicked on 15 poems and still not found a one I have never seen. Let me go see your "most popular" one and what it might be.
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2016 10:15:00 AM
I am spending too much time working and dealing with life's intrusions. CIAO!!
Date: 8/23/2013 9:58:00 AM
You summed up the typical man really well.....great limerick. Hugs
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Date: 7/5/2013 12:03:00 AM
This is cute/ humor ;} happy fourth of July ;}
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Date: 5/18/2013 9:34:00 PM
Been there so many times Duke. You made me smile. Thanks for that It feels good. Keep keeping on! Best wishes Michael
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Date: 5/1/2013 9:55:00 AM
I've seen them husbands sitting on the benches lol Cute Limerick !! Love it !!
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Date: 4/20/2013 11:03:00 PM
What my sis said.... hahah TOTALLY HOW YOU DESCRIBE MY DAD... hahaha The first line reminds me of my mom so much. :) Once again, wonderful poem!Have a fabulous week, poet! - D. W. Breidenthal
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2016 9:54:00 AM
Hey, JW E. Hope you are well.
Date: 4/18/2013 12:52:00 AM
this is so typical and that makes it great fodder for your well crafted limerick. Well, it's nearly 1 a.m. You should see all the comments I am trying to catch up on today thanks to my being so busy this whole week!! Wish me luck!!!
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Date: 4/15/2013 7:50:00 AM
That's me on the bench...ha. Gettin' a kick out of some of your comments this morning, Duke. The one on my 'Moon' poem really CRACKED me up...hehe. No bun intended...we could do this all day...
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2016 10:14:00 AM
I just left you a comment on one of yours--a bit late. I am glad to have been able to give you a smile.
Date: 4/4/2013 4:50:00 PM
Yeah Duke... It got so bad here one of the mall benches has my name on it...Great limerick.... Jake
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2016 10:00:00 AM
Funny-the older I get, the more stuck to benches I become. I do like electronics and science shops and will get up for those!!
Date: 4/1/2013 7:41:00 PM
Hahahah! That's my dad! He hates shopping so much! Love this so true limerick! Oddly, I'm not a shopper at all myself. Always, Laura
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2016 9:58:00 AM
So...you are not the material girl! It can seem like a chore. Hope you are well.
Date: 3/31/2013 6:02:00 PM
I love this No Nonsense Appoach Limerick, Thanks!
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 3/31/2013 6:07:00 PM
Hey judy--my wife always says tell it like it is! Thanks.
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