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The Reddening Sun

the reddening sun the black clouds gather and rain reddening resumes ________________________________ April 15, 2018

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/16/2018 4:30:00 PM

You pass on a sensible message with this short poem, Probir....dark moments in life will pass, and all will be well again! Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/16/2018 8:21:00 PM

Thank you, Paul ... Regards ... Probir

Maria Williams

Date: 4/15/2018 8:19:00 AM

Very descriptive Haiku Probir - Strong, colorful and says it all in the three lines...Maria :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2018 9:12:00 PM

Right, Maria ... Thank you for reading between the lines too ...