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Red Umbrella

I stepped out into the dreary rain But I’ve only got love on the brain Nothing can get me down today Everything seems like fun and play Holding this red umbrella over my head There is nothing I could possibly dread Together my red umbrella and I take on the world Becoming a magic wand when twirled and whirled AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on October 30, 2018 for contest THE RED UMBRELLA sponsored by EVE ROPER - RANKED 1ST

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Sandra Haight

Date: 11/19/2018 6:05:00 PM

Love the magic in your red umbrella, Line, expressed in just eight lines! Well done, and congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/19/2018 7:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sandra, for your lovely visit and compliment.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2018 1:00:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/17/2018 1:38:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Most appreciated.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/14/2018 11:53:00 AM

A delight! Congratulations on your top win :) xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2018 5:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2018 11:32:00 AM

- Wonderful poem, Line ... congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2018 6:00:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 11/14/2018 6:08:00 AM

Good Job friend!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2018 6:00:00 PM

Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/13/2018 11:05:00 PM

Thank you for entering my contest, Line, you had everything I was looking for. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2018 6:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve, for sponsoring this fun contest.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/2/2018 9:09:00 AM

Delightful ... CayCay

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/2/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, CayCay.

Mike Hauser

Date: 10/31/2018 7:39:00 PM

Nice!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 9:59:00 PM

Thanks, Mike, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/31/2018 1:39:00 PM

Light, airy, fun and upbeat! Nice entry for the contest, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 1:40:00 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.

Chris Green

Date: 10/31/2018 8:30:00 AM

Really nicely done my friend. Best of luck in the contest

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 9:21:00 AM

Thank you, Chris. Most appreciated.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/31/2018 8:25:00 AM

That last line was so whimsical and fun- love it! ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 9:21:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/30/2018 10:19:00 PM

Now I want a red umbrella...for some reason. -Richard

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 9:22:00 AM

LOL There is something totally magical about red umbrellas, Richard. I'm sure it would work for you too.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2018 8:34:00 PM

what a sweet interpretation of the image Line:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2018 9:49:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jan.