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The Red Road

The Shaman sits upon the sand, the sand of ocher clay; between the walls of ruins tall, where ancient one did lay. The sky above, the earth between; took in her sincere pleas tinksha’s toned, soft flutes droned, her mantra’s dire decree. To be the light on darkened paths, within the night belayed; and be the brave dark in the glow, of God’s pristine light portrayed. Her life long work no sacrifice a love of mankind to display. *One may be of any race or of almost any religion and walk the Red Road. The Good Red Road is a path, a way of living. It's full meaning is the way one acts, the methods one uses, and what directs one's doing. There is more to the Red Road than spoken word or written words on paper. It is behavior, attitude, a way of living, a way of "doing" with reverence - of walking strong yet softly, so as not to harm or disturb other life. The Red Road is a pathway to truth, peace and harmony.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/13/2010 9:42:00 PM
Hey, I am finally seeing the winners of this contest. Congrats, Deb. This was a lovely winner.
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Date: 9/13/2010 7:36:00 AM
Yes! I love your philosophy. One need only follow the practical tenets of any great master and be fulfilled. What I sort of mean is that I am frightened at the idea of religious fanaticism. Love, Dave.
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Date: 9/13/2010 4:39:00 AM
I love the meter and flow of this piece, a pleasure to read. Congratulations on your deserved win ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 9/12/2010 3:02:00 PM
Wow. How are you doing, Deborah? Your writing is always puts a smile on my face. Getting better, too. This poem is going to my faves.
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Date: 9/12/2010 10:17:00 AM
Deborah, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 9/12/2010 8:52:00 AM
This poem has lovely depth and speaks with its tone and reverance. Thanks.
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Date: 9/11/2010 8:30:00 PM
lovely , congrats on your win
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Date: 9/11/2010 4:13:00 PM
This sure is a very vivid piece, really enjoyed reading this--beautiful way of describing what you do-- congrats on your win :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 9/11/2010 10:41:00 AM
Hey Debbie-Wonderful write, I've never heard it put quite that way before, I''m going to have to look into it! I just got my book released last week, here is the address if you want to check it out!http://www.publishamerica.net/product119464.html ~Tirzah~
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Date: 9/11/2010 5:17:00 AM
A beautiful piece. many congratulations on this win.
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Date: 9/11/2010 4:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win!!!! lovely write...luv Michael
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:43:00 PM
This is very nice, Deb, and I think your meter is only getting better and better. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place , Deb
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:12:00 PM
Cool Lady! I like your thoughts on the "Red Road" is more important than what one in youth first considers. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/10/2010 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest. Love, iolanda
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Date: 9/10/2010 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest Deb. Love Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:43:00 PM
What a lovely piece..your always teaching me something...congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:00:00 PM
I learn something every time I turn to this site. Thanks for the education and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/10/2010 3:51:00 PM
My congratulations on your great 4th Place Win, Deb. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/10/2010 3:19:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in the Work contest.. a magnificent write and super win for u to enjoy this happy weekend with luv...
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Date: 9/10/2010 2:34:00 PM
Aha!! So glad to see this landed at the top of the winner's list! Who could not win taking the Red road to truth peace and harmony? Congratulations for leading us along! :)
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Date: 9/10/2010 1:38:00 PM
I didn't know much about the work of a Shaman, Deb, but this seems like a very worthwhile occupation -- bringing spiritual enlightenment to promote peace and harmony. Well done! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:03:00 PM
good is the red road soaked in blood?
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Date: 9/9/2010 12:39:00 AM
Beautiful write with truth! how's you? thank you for your comment! i'm not sure which blog you want me to comment on? lots of love Simone
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Date: 9/8/2010 3:33:00 PM
Excelent write and use of wording, i enjoyed it very much ...... thanks
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