The Red Eye To the Soul

Here I stand
sweat dripping off my nose
as I bounce my axe 
   in my left hand,
blood slides off the blade.

They tell me
   my eye turn crimson
when I’m like this,
   another stain in the snow.

A flash to the left,
     shift to the right
as I concave their chest,
   blood splashing upon my lips.
Tearing
my weapon out of 
    the cavity I created
I rip the jaw
      from the next unfortunate.

They tell me
   my eyes turn red
when I’m like this,
   another stain in the snow.

I lick the back of my hand
   after I remove
       a part of this skull
and bury the spike on my elbow
   just under the ribs
      of the one behind me,
more blood splatters my chest.

They tell me
   my eyes tinge with blood
when I’m like this,
   another stain in the snow.

I deflect the weapon
   of someone
      I let in to close
and snap into his throat
      with my teeth,
blood spraying my face,
   and as I lick my lips
my axe severs a head,
        body toppling to the ground.

They tell me
   my eyes scream blood
when I’m like this,
   another stain in the snow.

My chest heaves
  as I shoulder through
the front line,
  grabbing the neck 
of some malcontent.
Using his body as a projectile
    I pin his companions beneath it.
Tossing my axe
     into the back of one fleeing
I draw daggers
   and hunker down
to clear a path
      for my brethren
shredding flesh,
   creating a crimson mist 
upon the battlefield.

They tell me
   my eyes bite into the soul
when I’m like this,
   another stain in the snow.

And as I rise,
    blood dripping
from every angle upon my body
I feel the calmest I’ve ever been.
Bathed in blood
I’ve found solitude.

They tell me
   my eyes burn with savagery
when I’m like this
    but I’m just another
          stain in the snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hansman Avatar
March 1, 2009 at 1:00 AM
That's how I feel..... angry...that I want to kill whoever hurts me... It's amazing how fast we can meet our fate, one minute you can be some sort of hero, and the next just a stain in the snow. A legend that the world will never know. Karma is a bitch. You should definitely read Poachers by Tom Franklin. I think you'll like it.
Parish Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 4:49 PM
A detailed gruesome fight on the battleground. Seems to have driven this poor soul insane. Good (but bloody) write Mark.
Ingraham Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 3:47 PM
this is really good. you are able to envision your poetry
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