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The Red Death

The days grow shorter. With each moon-rise there are newly deceased leaves resting on the cold, frost-covered soil. Their lace-like edges adorned with death's crystal kiss. Forever red, never green again. Their death paints the forests with vibrant colors, and no one stops to mourn the loss of life. The trees let go of their dead outer furs, showing bare, ugly bones. Their skeletons stand starkly against a pale winter's sky, and only then does it seem fitting, because the bones now mourn the red ones, forever gone. But after a few bitter-cold months, small cocoons start to form along the tree's barren limbs, promising life during the new season. They forget their lost red coat and sing for the green yet to come. For they will look alive again. Forgetting the red death. Seen as skeletons no more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/14/2014 6:33:00 AM
A fine Ode and congratulations on the fine win Jae
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Date: 1/13/2014 2:27:00 PM
JAE, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 11/8/2013 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win Jae..
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Date: 11/7/2013 12:08:00 PM
Jae * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/7/2013 6:39:00 AM
I pictured a several beautiful paintings while reading this poem Jae...So glad to be introduced to your fine writing...Congratulations - Tim
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:04:00 PM
Hi Jae, it was nice seeing you on this list... ... CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM!!! awesome :) LUV~ LINDA
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Date: 11/6/2013 11:46:00 AM
I rejoice with you on your well deserved win. There are many great people here on this site.. Your presence will enhance the flavor of the Poets' Soup. Congratulations, my friend...... Jake
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Date: 11/6/2013 1:04:00 AM
Thank you all for the kind words! :) I'm am very happy to have placed at all in the contest. This gives me hope and inspiration to keep writing! Blessings! -Jaé
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Date: 11/6/2013 12:26:00 AM
Hi Jae, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/5/2013 11:33:00 PM
Congrads in the contest.
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Date: 11/5/2013 8:42:00 PM
I like the image of bare trees like skeletons. Good job, Jae!
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Date: 11/5/2013 4:55:00 PM
I thought this was a stunning poem; some great phrases - "death's crystal kiss", "sing for the green yet to come" - congrats! :)
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Date: 11/4/2013 1:23:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Jae ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2013 9:07:00 PM
Hello Jae, back here again...such deep imagery and words... thanks for the epic first look into your poems...LINDA
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Jae Airgead
Date: 11/3/2013 9:12:00 PM
No problem, When I am stressed or just tired of our world being so fake and simple my poems get deeper and deeper haha. Hope you enjoy the ones to come! -Jae
Date: 11/3/2013 8:38:00 PM
Jasmine, the title seems to be interesting... can't wait to read your first poem... ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Jae Airgead
Date: 11/3/2013 8:58:00 PM
Thank you Linda, I am excited to have somewhere to post the poems I come up with in the odd moments of my day. I will be sure to check out your contest! Blessings!

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